Sure. Please find the revised proposal in branch proposal218 of my public torspec repository:
https://gitweb.torproject.org/user/karsten/torspec.git/shortlog/refs/heads/p...
Hi Karsten. Looks good! Pushed some revisions to my proposal218 branch...
https://gitweb.torproject.org/user/atagar/torspec.git/shortlog/refs/heads/pr...
For the 'Per-circuit cell stats' section it would be nice if there was an explanation about what the 'N' and 'P' prefixes mean (it's described as "app-ward" and "exit-ward" but I haven't a clue what those mean).
Cheers! -Damian