commit e140a133b04b086f7fd81eb12da10b446d0199fb Author: har00ga <jaruga@dial.ga> Date: Tue Aug 14 00:20:31 2018 +0000 Formatting and text revisions --- C/circumvention.page | 2 +- C/downloading.page | 4 ++-- C/onionsites.page | 4 ++-- C/plugins.page | 5 +++-- 4 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/C/circumvention.page b/C/circumvention.page index d46e876..c443db3 100644 --- a/C/circumvention.page +++ b/C/circumvention.page @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ individual circumstances. <p> If you are trying to circumvent a blocked connection for the first time, you should try the different transports: obfs3, obfs4, ScrambleSuit, fte, -meek-azure, meek-amazon. +meek-azure and Snowflake. </p> <p> If you try all of these options, and none of them gets you online, diff --git a/C/downloading.page b/C/downloading.page index 54f78a1..3215c90 100644 --- a/C/downloading.page +++ b/C/downloading.page @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ below. <p> GetTor is a service that automatically responds to messages with links to the latest version of Tor Browser, hosted at a variety of locations, - such as Dropbox, Google Drive and Github.. + such as Dropbox, Google Drive and GitHub. </p> <p> @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ below. </steps> <p> - To use GetTor via Jabber/XMPP (Tor Messenger, Jitsi, CoyIM): + To use GetTor via Jabber/XMPP (Jitsi, CoyIM, etc.): </p> <steps> <item> diff --git a/C/onionsites.page b/C/onionsites.page index 4cbc75a..066a718 100644 --- a/C/onionsites.page +++ b/C/onionsites.page @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ non-private web: <p> Just like any other website, you will need to know the address of an onion service in order to connect to it. An onion address is a string of -sixteen mostly random letters and numbers, followed by “.onion”. +16 (and in V3 format, 56) mostly random letters and numbers, followed by “.onion”. </p> </section> @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ sixteen mostly random letters and numbers, followed by “.onion”. <title>Troubleshooting</title> <p> If you cannot reach the onion service you require, make sure that you have -entered the 16-character onion address correctly: even a small mistake +entered the onion address correctly: even a small mistake will stop Tor Browser from being able to reach the site. </p> <p> diff --git a/C/plugins.page b/C/plugins.page index 0f68a80..db4fe04 100644 --- a/C/plugins.page +++ b/C/plugins.page @@ -38,8 +38,9 @@ security of the browser, which might lead to deanonymization. <p> Tor Browser includes an add-on called NoScript, accessed through the -“S” icon at the top-left of the window, which allows you to control the -JavaScript that runs on individual web pages, or to block it entirely. +“S” icon at the top-left of the window. NoScript allows you to control the +JavaScript (and other scripts) that runs on individual web pages, or +block it entirely. </p> <p> <media type="image" width="400" src="media/plugins/noscript_menu.png" />