[or-cvs] r23190: {projects} wordo reported by robert ransom (projects/articles)

[Roger Dingledine]

Author: arma
Date: 2010-09-14 20:48:10 +0000 (Tue, 14 Sep 2010)
New Revision: 23190

Modified:
   projects/articles/circumvention-features.html
   projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex
   projects/articles/circumvention-features.txt
Log:
wordo reported by robert ransom


Modified: projects/articles/circumvention-features.html
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--- projects/articles/circumvention-features.html	2010-09-14 18:30:59 UTC (rev 23189)
+++ projects/articles/circumvention-features.html	2010-09-14 20:48:10 UTC (rev 23190)
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 
-<h2>Ten things to look for in tools that circumvent Internet censorship</h2>
+<h2>Ten things to look in a circumvention tool</h2>
 
 <p>
 As more countries crack down on Internet use, people around the world
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 tool is who else uses it. A wide variety of users means that if somebody
 finds out you are using the software, they can't conclude much about
 why you're using it. A privacy tool like Tor has many different classes
-of users around the world (ranging from ordinary people and and human
+of users around the world (ranging from ordinary people and human
 rights activists to corporations, law enforcement, and militaries) so
 the fact that you have Tor installed doesn't give people much additional
 information about who you are or what sorts of sites you might visit. On

Modified: projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex
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--- projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex	2010-09-14 18:30:59 UTC (rev 23189)
+++ projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex	2010-09-14 20:48:10 UTC (rev 23190)
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
 tool is who else uses it. A wide variety of users means that if somebody
 finds out you are using the software, they can't conclude much about
 why you're using it. A privacy tool like Tor has many different classes
-of users around the world (ranging from ordinary people and and human
+of users around the world (ranging from ordinary people and human
 rights activists to corporations, law enforcement, and militaries) so
 the fact that you have Tor installed doesn't give people much additional
 information about who you are or what sorts of sites you might visit. On

Modified: projects/articles/circumvention-features.txt
===================================================================
--- projects/articles/circumvention-features.txt	2010-09-14 18:30:59 UTC (rev 23189)
+++ projects/articles/circumvention-features.txt	2010-09-14 20:48:10 UTC (rev 23190)
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 tool is who else uses it. A wide variety of users means that if somebody
 finds out you are using the software, they can't conclude much about
 why you're using it. A privacy tool like Tor has many different classes
-of users around the world (ranging from ordinary people and and human
+of users around the world (ranging from ordinary people and human
 rights activists to corporations, law enforcement, and militaries) so
 the fact that you have Tor installed doesn't give people much additional
 information about who you are or what sorts of sites you might visit. On