[tbb-dev] How much the Tor Browser is still a Bundle?
intrigeri at boum.org
Tue Mar 11 18:13:19 UTC 2014
Mark Smith wrote (11 Mar 2014 17:23:58 GMT) :
> OK by me. My only suggestion is to consider changing the last one to:
> "Please wait while a connection to the Tor network is established."
Just my 2cts: most technical documentation style guides I've read
recommend to avoid the passive voice.
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