[tbb-dev] How much the Tor Browser is still a Bundle?

[intrigeri]

Hi,

Mark Smith wrote (11 Mar 2014 17:23:58 GMT) :
> OK by me.  My only suggestion is to consider changing the last one to:

>   "Please wait while a connection to the Tor network is established."

Just my 2cts: most technical documentation style guides I've read
recommend to avoid the passive voice.

Cheers,
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