Author: rransom Date: 2011-03-28 21:11:51 +0000 (Mon, 28 Mar 2011) New Revision: 24494 Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml Log: Minor language cleanup Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml =================================================================== --- website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml 2011-03-28 21:11:24 UTC (rev 24493) +++ website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml 2011-03-28 21:11:51 UTC (rev 24494) @@ -11,11 +11,11 @@ </div> <div id="maincol"> <a id="rpms"></a> - <h2><a class="anchor" href="#rpms">Tor packages for rpm-based + <h2><a class="anchor" href="#rpms">Tor packages for RPM-based linux distributions.</a></h2> <br> - <p>Do not use the packages in the native repositories. They are + <p><strong>Do not</strong> use the packages in the native repositories. They are frequently out of date. That means you'll be missing stability and security fixes. </p> @@ -54,8 +54,9 @@ <p style="font-size: small"> The DNS name <code>deb.torproject.org</code> is actually a set of independent - servers in a DNS round robin configuration. If you for some reason cannot - access it you might try to use the name of one of its part instead. Try + servers in a DNS round-robin configuration. If for some reason you cannot + use it, you might be able to access one of the individual servers + instead. Try <code>deb-master.torproject.org</code>, <code>mirror.netcologne.de</code> or <code>tor.mirror.youam.de</code>. @@ -71,7 +72,7 @@ <p> If you'd like to build from source, please follow the <a - href="<gitblob>doc/tor-rpm-creation.txt">rpm creation instructions</a>. + href="<gitblob>doc/tor-rpm-creation.txt">RPM creation instructions</a>. </p> <hr>