Author: arma Date: 2012-12-02 09:28:11 +0000 (Sun, 02 Dec 2012) New Revision: 25924 Modified: website/trunk/projects/en/obfsproxy-debian-instructions.wml Log: tweaks from talking to weasel Modified: website/trunk/projects/en/obfsproxy-debian-instructions.wml =================================================================== --- website/trunk/projects/en/obfsproxy-debian-instructions.wml 2012-11-29 16:25:02 UTC (rev 25923) +++ website/trunk/projects/en/obfsproxy-debian-instructions.wml 2012-12-02 09:28:11 UTC (rev 25924) @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ <p> Add the <a href="<page docs/debian>#development">development Tor APT repository</a> and run the specified commands to install tor - and deb.torproject.org-keyring. You need Tor 0.2.4.x Tor because + and deb.torproject.org-keyring. You need Tor 0.2.4.x because it knows how to automatically report your obfsproxy address to <a href="https://bridges.torproject.org/?transport=obfs2">BridgeDB</a>. </p> @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ Exitpolicy reject *:* \## CHANGEME_1 -> provide a nickname for your bridge, can be anything you like -Nickname CHANGEME_1 +\#Nickname CHANGEME_1 \## CHANGEME_2 -> provide some email address so we can contact you if there's a problem \#ContactInfo CHANGEME_2 @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ </pre> <p> - Don't forget to edit the <i>CHANGEME</i> fields! + Don't forget to uncomment and edit the <i>CHANGEME</i> fields! </p> <h3>Step 3: Launch Tor and verify that it bootstraps</h3> @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ </pre> <p> - If Tor is earlier in the bootstrapping phase, wait till it gets to + If Tor is earlier in the bootstrapping phase, wait until it gets to 100%. </p>