Author: rransom Date: 2011-04-26 15:06:06 +0000 (Tue, 26 Apr 2011) New Revision: 24677 Modified: projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex Log: Fix style issues Modified: projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex =================================================================== --- projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex 2011-04-26 15:05:12 UTC (rev 24676) +++ projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex 2011-04-26 15:06:06 UTC (rev 24677) @@ -313,12 +313,16 @@ standards coordination. Of the major private browsing modes, Google Chrome's Incognito Mode comes the -closest to conveying the idea of ``identity'' to the user, and the +closest to conveying the idea of ``identity'' to the user, and its implementation is also simple as a result. The Incognito Mode window is a -separate, stylized window that clearly conveys an alternate identity is in use -for this window, which can be used concurrent to the non-private identity. -The better UI appears to lead to less mode error (where the user forgets their -private browsing state) compared to other browsers\cite{private-browsing}. +separate, stylized window which clearly conveys that an alternate identity +is in use +in this window, which can be used concurrently with the non-private identity. +The better UI appears to lead to less mode error (in which the user forgets +whether +private browsing is enabled) than other browsers' private browsing +modes\cite{private-browsing}. +% XXXX ‘mode error’? The Mozilla Weave project appears to be proposing an identity-oriented method of managing, syncing, and storing authentication tokens, and also has use