commit f83a1c44e1e064800f972ad8287c0874d61b4b36 Author: Colin Childs <colin@torproject.org> Date: Mon Oct 17 23:20:55 2016 -0500 Update downloading.page to include review feedback --- C/downloading.page | 7 +++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/C/downloading.page b/C/downloading.page index 85653e8..51848d1 100644 --- a/C/downloading.page +++ b/C/downloading.page @@ -12,9 +12,8 @@ <p> The safest and simplest way to download Tor Browser is from the official Tor Project website at https://www.torproject.org. Your connection to -the site will be secured using -<link xref='secure-connections'>HTTPS</link>, so you can be sure that no -one is tampering with your copy of the software while you download it. +the site will be secured using<link xref='secure-connections'>HTTPS</link>, +which makes it much harder for somebody to tamper with. </p> <p> @@ -69,7 +68,7 @@ below. </steps> <p> - To use GetTor via XMPP: + To use GetTor via Jabber/XMPP (Tor Messenger, Jitsi, CoyIM): </p> <steps> <item>