commit 3185d669e5b10625b35974caad45a116bee940da Author: emma peel emma.peel@riseup.net Date: Fri Apr 16 15:07:44 2021 +0200
use less contractions --- content/training/resources/tor-training/contents.lr | 18 ++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
diff --git a/content/training/resources/tor-training/contents.lr b/content/training/resources/tor-training/contents.lr index 08dacbd..07a1fde 100644 --- a/content/training/resources/tor-training/contents.lr +++ b/content/training/resources/tor-training/contents.lr @@ -14,8 +14,7 @@ slides: title: Topics ---- description: - -- What's Tor? +- What is Tor? - Types of relays - Technical setup - More about relays @@ -23,9 +22,8 @@ description: - Getting help
- #### slide #### -title: What's Tor? +title: What is Tor? ---- description: - Tor is a free software and an open network. @@ -80,8 +78,8 @@ description: title: Exit relay ---- description: -- The exit relay is the final relay in a Tor circuit that sends traffic out its destination. -- That's why exit relays have the most significant legal exposure and liability of all the relays. +- The exit relay is the final relay in a Tor circuit, sends the traffic to its destination. +- That is why exit relays have the most significant legal exposure and liability of all the relays. - Before running an exit relay, talk with your local digital rights organization. - **You should not run a Tor exit relay from your home.**
@@ -90,7 +88,7 @@ description: title: Bridge ---- description: -- A bridge is a node in the network that isn't listed in the public Tor directory, making it harder for ISPs and governments to block it. +- A bridge is a node in the network that is not listed in the public Tor directory, making it harder for ISPs and governments to block it. - Bridges are relatively easy, low-risk, and low bandwidth Tor relays to operate. - And there's another special kind of bridge: Pluggable transports. It hides your Tor traffic by adding a layer of obfuscation.
@@ -353,7 +351,7 @@ title: Metrics ---- description: - Metrics portal - [https://metrics.torproject.org%5D(https://metrics.torproject.org) -- It's possible to search: how many relays are in the network, how many are exits, etc. +- Is possible to search: how many relays are in the network, how many are exits, etc. - In 2021 there are ~6,600 public relays and ~1,500 bridges. - Check: how many relays are in your country? Who runs these relays? How diverse is it?
@@ -450,14 +448,14 @@ title: Running a relay with others ---- description: - You can work with your university department, employer or institution, or an organization like Torservers.org, Nos oignons, etc. -- Some organizations are dedicated to this purpose only, and they are called Relay Associations: [https://community.torproject.org/relay/community-resources/relay-association...) +- Some organizations are dedicated to this purpose only, and they are called Relay Associations: https://community.torproject.org/relay/community-resources/relay-associations/.
#### slide #### title: Relays associations ---- description: -- It's often advised to create some type of non-profit corporation. This is useful for having a bank account and shared ownership. +- It's often advised to create some type of non-profit organization. This is useful for having a bank account and shared ownership. - The most important thing is to have a group of people (3-5 suggested to start) interested in helping.