commit b11d531d31a247025309ff88bcd48ed2c2ce1511 Author: Sebastian Hahn sebastian@torproject.org Date: Sat Mar 14 03:26:58 2015 +0100
Reword first paragraph on tor overview --- about/en/overview.wml | 18 +++++++++++------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/about/en/overview.wml b/about/en/overview.wml index aa3cb56..c275f9f 100644 --- a/about/en/overview.wml +++ b/about/en/overview.wml @@ -29,13 +29,17 @@ <h3><a class="anchor" href="#overview">Overview</a></h3>
<p> - Tor is a network of virtual tunnels that allows people and groups to - improve their privacy and security on the Internet. It also enables - software developers to create new communication tools - with built-in privacy features. Tor provides the foundation for - a range of applications that allow organizations and individuals - to share information over public networks without compromising their - privacy. + The Tor network is a group of <a href="<page + getinvolved/volunteer>">volunteer</a>-operated servers that allows people + to improve their privacy and security on the Internet. Tor's users employ + this network by connecting through a series of virtual tunnels rather than + making a direct connection, thus allowing both organizations and + individuals to share information over public networks without compromising + their privacy. Along the same line, Tor is an effective censorship + circumvention tool, allowing its users to reach otherwise blocked + destinations or content. Tor can also be used as a building block for + software developers to create new communication tools with built-in privacy + features. </p>
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