[tor-commits] [community/master] Better l10n strings

Mon May 17 19:42:22 UTC 2021

commit 1675d0c4d104dceff0943c6e6a64168e00af35f3
Author: gus <gus at torproject.org>
Date:   Mon May 17 16:42:12 2021 -0300

    Better l10n strings
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 .../technical-setup/snowflake/browser/contents.lr    | 13 ++++++++-----
 .../technical-setup/snowflake/contents.lr            |  4 ++--
 .../technical-setup/snowflake/standalone/contents.lr | 20 ++++++++++++++------
 3 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/browser/contents.lr b/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/browser/contents.lr
index 4a3039b..3d4c8d7 100644
--- a/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/browser/contents.lr
+++ b/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/browser/contents.lr
@@ -6,20 +6,23 @@ title: Browser Snowflake proxy
 ---
 body:
 
-Running a Snowflake proxy as a browser add on is a great low-effort way to donate bandwidth if you don't have acces to an always-on highly connected server. There are very few requirements to running a browser-based proxy:
+Running a Snowflake proxy as a browser add on is a great low-effort way to donate bandwidth if you don't have acces to an always-on highly connected server.
+There are very few requirements to running a browser-based proxy:
 1. Use Firefox or Chromium/Chrome as your browser
 2. Have WebRTC enabled
 
 ### 1. Install the Snowflake addon to your browser
 
-If you are running Firefox, you can install our [Firefox addon](https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/addon/torproject-snowflake/). Chome users can install our addon from the [Google webstore](https://chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/snowflake/mafpmfcccpbjnhfhjnllmmalhifmlcie).
+If you are running Firefox, you can install our [Firefox addon](https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/addon/torproject-snowflake/).
+Chome users can install our addon from the [Google webstore](https://chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/snowflake/mafpmfcccpbjnhfhjnllmmalhifmlcie).
 
-Once it is installed, you can toggle the `Enabled` switch to turn it off and on. It's easiest to leave it running while you browse and it should not interfere with your regular browsing experience.
+Once it is installed, you can toggle the `Enabled` switch to turn it off and on.
+It's easiest to leave it running while you browse and it should not interfere with your regular browsing experience.
 
 ### 2. Monitor your Snowflake's status and usage
 
-The Snowflake addon will inform you about how many people you have helped in the last 24 hours. It will also display an error message if the Snowflake could not connect to clients or the Snowflake bridge.
-
+The Snowflake addon will inform you about how many people you have helped in the last 24 hours.
+It will also display an error message if the Snowflake could not connect to clients or the Snowflake bridge.
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 html: two-columns-page.html
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diff --git a/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/contents.lr b/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/contents.lr
index 11cce6f..2103d91 100644
--- a/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/contents.lr
+++ b/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/contents.lr
@@ -4,13 +4,13 @@ title: Snowflake
 ---
 body:
 
-This guide will help you set up a Snowflake proxy to help censored users connect to the Tor network. The requirements are:
+This guide will help you set up a Snowflake proxy to help censored users connect to the Tor network.
+The requirements are:
 1. Internet connectivity
 
 If you don't meet the requirements to run a Tor relay or obfs4 bridge, running a Snowflake proxy is a great way to donate your bandwidth to help users circumvent censorship.
 
 There are a few different options for running a Snowflake proxy.
-
 ---
 html: two-columns-page.html
 ---
diff --git a/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/standalone/contents.lr b/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/standalone/contents.lr
index ce9898e..43cdcb9 100644
--- a/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/standalone/contents.lr
+++ b/content/relay-operations/technical-setup/snowflake/standalone/contents.lr
@@ -6,9 +6,12 @@ title: Standalone Snowflake proxy
 ---
 body:
 
-This guide will help you set up a standalone Snowflake proxy on a server to help censored users connect to the Tor network. The only requirements are internet connectivity, however one of the main advantages of standalone Snowflake proxies is that they can be installed on servers and offer a higher bandwidth and more reliable option for users behind restrictive NATs and firewalls. Therefore, we especially recommend:
+This guide will help you set up a standalone Snowflake proxy on a server to help censored users connect to the Tor network.
+The only requirements are internet connectivity, however one of the main advantages of standalone Snowflake proxies is that they can be installed on servers and offer a higher bandwidth and more reliable option for users behind restrictive NATs and firewalls.
+Therefore, we especially recommend:
 1. 24/7 Internet connectivity
-2. A full-cone NAT (you can use this [NAT behaviour tool](https://github.com/pion/stun/tree/master/cmd/stun-nat-behaviour) to test what type of NAT you have. The properties you are looking for are address-independent mapping and either address-independent or address-dependent filtering)
+2. A full-cone NAT (you can use this [NAT behaviour tool](https://github.com/pion/stun/tree/master/cmd/stun-nat-behaviour) to test what type of NAT you have.
+The properties you are looking for are address-independent mapping and either address-independent or address-dependent filtering)
 
 There are several ways to setup and run a standalone snowflake proxy.
 
@@ -16,7 +19,9 @@ There are several ways to setup and run a standalone snowflake proxy.
 
 You must first have [Docker](https://docs.docker.com/engine/install/) and [docker-compose](https://docs.docker.com/compose/install/) installed.
 
-We have a [Docker image](https://hub.docker.com/repository/docker/thetorproject/snowflake-proxy) to ease the setup of a snowflake proxy. First [download docker-compose.yml](https://gitlab.torproject.org/tpo/anti-censorship/docker-snowflake-proxy/raw/main/docker-compose.yml). Then, deploy the proxy by running
+We have a [Docker image](https://hub.docker.com/repository/docker/thetorproject/snowflake-proxy) to ease the setup of a snowflake proxy.
+First [download docker-compose.yml](https://gitlab.torproject.org/tpo/anti-censorship/docker-snowflake-proxy/raw/main/docker-compose.yml).
+Then, deploy the proxy by running:
 ```
 docker-compose up -d snowflake-proxy
 ```
@@ -33,7 +38,10 @@ There is now an ansible role to install a Snowflake proxy on Debian [created by
 
 ### Compiling and running from source
 
-1. First you will need to install and configure Go to build the standalone proxy-go code. If you are running Ubuntu or Debian, you can install Go by executing `apt install golang`. Otherwise visit https://golang.org/dl/. You will need Go 1.13+ to run the Snowflake proxy.
+1. First you will need to install and configure Go to build the standalone proxy-go code.
+If you are running Ubuntu or Debian, you can install Go by executing `apt install golang`.
+Otherwise visit https://golang.org/dl/.
+You will need Go 1.13+ to run the Snowflake proxy.
 
 2. Clone the [source code](#source-code).
    ```
@@ -45,11 +53,11 @@ There is now an ansible role to install a Snowflake proxy on Debian [created by
    ```
 4. Run the Snowflake proxy.
 
-   For our fallback proxy-go instances on snowflake-broker, [we manage proxy-go instances using runit](https://gitlab.torproject.org/tpo/anti-censorship/team/-/wikis/Survival-Guides/Snowflake-Bridge-Survival-Guide#standalone-proxy-go-instances). However, a simpler nohup command will also allow you to run an instance in the background.
+For our fallback proxy-go instances on snowflake-broker, [we manage proxy-go instances using runit](https://gitlab.torproject.org/tpo/anti-censorship/team/-/wikis/Survival-Guides/Snowflake-Bridge-Survival-Guide#standalone-proxy-go-instances).
+However, a simpler nohup command will also allow you to run an instance in the background.
    ```
    nohup ./proxy &
    ```
-
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