[tor-commits] [community/staging] Apply 2 suggestion(s) to 1 file(s)

[hiro at torproject.org]

commit 8449708e2fa5412d5d8b63bed7cf1dd8facae6a8
Author: emma peel <emmapeel at torproject.org>
Date:   Wed Mar 3 17:45:34 2021 +0000

    Apply 2 suggestion(s) to 1 file(s)
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 content/localization/pick-a-project/contents.lr | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/localization/pick-a-project/contents.lr b/content/localization/pick-a-project/contents.lr
index a0f2c6a..72c3f4c 100644
--- a/content/localization/pick-a-project/contents.lr
+++ b/content/localization/pick-a-project/contents.lr
@@ -24,9 +24,9 @@ Please consider [helping with translations](/localization/becoming-tor-translato
 This is due to the fact that each additional language requires more resources, including a set of committed translators and space on our servers.
 
 There are many files to translate and keep up to date to maintain a language for the Tor Project. Moreover, once translated, there are always future updates and new pages needing translated too.
+The more users that will benefit from a translation, the more scalable that translation becomes – as it will also benefit from the help of a larger number of volunteers keeping it up to date.
 
-It is more scalable if we contribute to a translation that will benefit more users, and be up to date because it will count with the help of more volunteers.
-For that we also ask you to form a team for your language: this way, all the contents can be reviewed by another person, and the translation will have better quality, and it is easier to maintain.
+We also recommend forming a team for your language: this way, the content can be reviewed by at least one other person, producing translations that are of higher quality and are easier to maintain.
 
 Although we would value your contribution to any of the projects above, our most critical needs are Tor Browser, the Tor Browser User Manual, and our Support portal: