[tor-commits] [manual/develop] sentence in one line

gus at torproject.org gus at torproject.org
Fri May 8 20:05:43 UTC 2020


commit e0f054451f80558688428b7c38986f9eb89526b3
Author: emma peel <emma.peel at riseup.net>
Date:   Sat Apr 11 08:18:55 2020 +0200

    sentence in one line
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 content/bridges/contents.lr | 16 ++++++++++++----
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/bridges/contents.lr b/content/bridges/contents.lr
index 5b084cf..608fc29 100644
--- a/content/bridges/contents.lr
+++ b/content/bridges/contents.lr
@@ -29,9 +29,13 @@ Because bridge addresses are not public, you will need to request them yourself.
 
 <img class="col-md-6" align="right" hspace="5" src="../../static/images/request-a-bridge.png">
 
-If you're starting Tor Browser for the first time, click "Configure" to open the Tor Network Settings window. After checking the checkbox "Tor is censored in my country," choose "Request a bridge from torproject.org" and click "Request a Bridge..." for BridgeDB to provide a bridge. Complete the CAPTCHA and click "Submit." Click "Connect" to save your settings.
+If you're starting Tor Browser for the first time, click "Configure" to open the Tor Network Settings window.
+After checking the checkbox "Tor is censored in my country," choose "Request a bridge from torproject.org" and click "Request a Bridge..." for BridgeDB to provide a bridge.
+Complete the CAPTCHA and click "Submit." Click "Connect" to save your settings.
 
-Or, if you have Tor Browser running, click on "Preferences" in the hamburger menu and then on "Tor" in the sidebar. In the "Bridges" section, check the checkbox "Use a bridge," and from the option "Request a bridge from torproject.org," click "Request a New Bridge..." for BridgeDB to provide a bridge. Complete the CAPTCHA and click "Submit." Your setting will automatically be saved once you close the tab.
+Or, if you have Tor Browser running, click on "Preferences" in the hamburger menu and then on "Tor" in the sidebar.
+In the "Bridges" section, check the checkbox "Use a bridge," and from the option "Request a bridge from torproject.org," click "Request a New Bridge..." for BridgeDB to provide a bridge.
+Complete the CAPTCHA and click "Submit." Your setting will automatically be saved once you close the tab.
 
 ### ENTERING BRIDGE ADDRESSES
 
@@ -39,8 +43,12 @@ Or, if you have Tor Browser running, click on "Preferences" in the hamburger men
 
 Once you have obtained some bridge addresses, you will need to enter them into Tor Launcher.
 
-If you're starting Tor Browser for the first time, click "Configure" to open the Tor Network Settings window. After checking the checkbox "Tor is censored in my country," choose "Provide a bridge I know" and enter each bridge address on a separate line. Click "Connect" to save your settings.
+If you're starting Tor Browser for the first time, click "Configure" to open the Tor Network Settings window.
+After checking the checkbox "Tor is censored in my country," choose "Provide a bridge I know" and enter each bridge address on a separate line.
+Click "Connect" to save your settings.
 
-Or, if you have Tor Browser running, click on "Preferences" in the hamburger menu and then on "Tor" in the sidebar. In the "Bridges" section, check the checkbox "Use a bridge," and from the option "Provide a bridge I know," enter each bridge address on a separate line. Your setting will automatically be saved once you close the tab.
+Or, if you have Tor Browser running, click on "Preferences" in the hamburger menu and then on "Tor" in the sidebar.
+In the "Bridges" section, check the checkbox "Use a bridge," and from the option "Provide a bridge I know," enter each bridge address on a separate line.
+Your settings will automatically be saved once you close the tab.
 
 If the connection fails, the bridges you received may be down. Please use one of the above methods to obtain more bridge addresses, and try again.





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