[tor-commits] [community/develop] better strings for l10n, layout, trailing spaces
emmapeel at torproject.org
emmapeel at torproject.org
Sat Oct 5 07:39:32 UTC 2019
commit 5b7a3f1509fc331fe7a444eb7f2ac63c9bbb7ad6
Author: gus <gus at torproject.org>
Date: Tue Sep 3 12:00:52 2019 -0400
better strings for l10n, layout, trailing spaces
---
content/outreach/contents.lr | 3 ++-
content/training/faq/contents.lr | 8 +++++---
content/training/risks/contents.lr | 22 +++++++++++++++-------
content/user-testing/current/contents.lr | 4 ++--
4 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
diff --git a/content/outreach/contents.lr b/content/outreach/contents.lr
index e6d65ef..8e7206a 100644
--- a/content/outreach/contents.lr
+++ b/content/outreach/contents.lr
@@ -20,4 +20,5 @@ body:
##Tell the world about Tor
-We love it when people bring information about Tor to their community events, conferences, and meetups. We've curated some beautiful materials for sharing in-person and on social media we welcome you to use.
\ No newline at end of file
+We love it when people bring information about Tor to their community events, conferences, and meetups.
+We've curated some beautiful materials for sharing in-person and on social media we welcome you to use.
diff --git a/content/training/faq/contents.lr b/content/training/faq/contents.lr
index f305b85..69a2d72 100644
--- a/content/training/faq/contents.lr
+++ b/content/training/faq/contents.lr
@@ -4,10 +4,12 @@ title: Tor Training FAQ
---
body:
-After running a couple of Tor training, you will find out that first time users have some similar questions about Tor. Here we aggregate the most frequent questions that we listened during our training sessions and you must be aware before running your training. For an extensive resource check [Support portal](https://support.torproject.org).
+After running a couple of Tor training, you will find out that first time users have some similar questions about Tor.
+Here we aggregate the most frequent questions that we listened during our training sessions and you must be aware before running your training.
+For an extensive resource check [Support portal](https://support.torproject.org).
* [Why is it called Tor?](https://support.torproject.org/about/why-is-it-called-tor/)
- * [Does using Tor Browser protect other applications on my computer?](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-13/)
+ * [Does using Tor Browser protect other applications on my computer?](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-13/)
* [Using Tor with a VPN is more secure?](https://support.torproject.org/faq/faq-5/)
* [Can I browse normal HTTPS sites with Tor?](https://support.torproject.org/https/https-2/)
* [Is it possible to find out the path that a client is taking on the Tor Network?](https://support.torproject.org/misc/misc-1/)
@@ -34,4 +36,4 @@ section_id: training
---
subtitle:
-You probably should know these answers before teaching about Tor
+You probably should know these answers before teaching about Tor
diff --git a/content/training/risks/contents.lr b/content/training/risks/contents.lr
index 6da1774..c1fea57 100644
--- a/content/training/risks/contents.lr
+++ b/content/training/risks/contents.lr
@@ -4,17 +4,22 @@ title: Risks
---
body:
-To our knowledge, no Tor trainer has ever faced consequences as a result of training others or speaking about Tor. However, in some countries and in certain circumstances, it's possible that a simply gathering of human rights defenders could be very risky, illegal or even subject of imprisonment, physical assaults, large fines, threats, placement on government watch lists and targeting for surveillance.
+To our knowledge, no Tor trainer has ever faced consequences as a result of training others or speaking about Tor.
+However, in some countries and in certain circumstances, it's possible that a simply gathering of human rights defenders could be very risky, illegal or even subject of imprisonment, physical assaults, large fines, threats, placement on government watch lists and targeting for surveillance.
If you want to run a Tor training for the first time and you don't know how to assess the political and social environment, we strongly encourage you read this document and, in case of doubt, to reach out Tor Community Team privately.
-Some of potential risks of running a digital security training are only valid in specific contexts. Therefore the potential risks associated to running a Tor training depend on:
+Some of potential risks of running a digital security training are only valid in specific contexts.
+Therefore the potential risks associated to running a Tor training depend on:
1. **Your threat model.** A high-profile activist already under a lot of surveillance, for example, might attract more attention when reaching out other activists to run a digital security training.
2. **The laws and regulations in the country.** Best to consult with local lawyers and local freedom of expression organizations, and learn whether your country has a record in prosecuting individuals engaging in similar types of activities.
-3. **The types of training.** Not all trainings carry the same weight in terms of potential risk. For example, talking about privacy on digital age might be appreciable, but teaching how to circumvent government censorship could be a serious felony.
+3. **The types of training.** Not all trainings carry the same weight in terms of potential risk.
+ For example, talking about privacy on digital age might be appreciable, but teaching how to circumvent government censorship could be a serious felony.
4. **The audience.** Gathering university students might not attract attention, but in case of a group of journalists working on leaked documents about government corruption, you might need to be extra careful on how to reach out them in a private way.
-5. **The training venue.** Running a Tor training in some spaces could expose your participants identity. Ideally, you should use a private space that you can control the participants entrance. Check before the training if participants are comfortable on revealing their identity to a third party, if it's the case.
+5. **The training venue.** Running a Tor training in some spaces could expose your participants identity.
+ Ideally, you should use a private space that you can control the participants entrance.
+ Check before the training if participants are comfortable on revealing their identity to a third party, if it's the case.
## Evaluating risks
@@ -29,12 +34,15 @@ Some questions you may want to answer before running a digital security training
Note, this is not an exhaustive list of questions.
-Additionally, while many countries do not have laws specifically prohibiting the activity of running digital security training, the use of digital security tools may still be criminalized in certain countries under other, broader laws. For example, using Tor Browser may be viewed as illegal or anti-government activity.
+Additionally, while many countries do not have laws specifically prohibiting the activity of running digital security training, the use of digital security tools may still be criminalized in certain countries under other, broader laws.
+For example, using Tor Browser may be viewed as illegal or anti-government activity.
-Please note that we are not lawyers, and any information we give you does not constitute legal advice. Additionally, your communication with us is not protected by any legal privilege so law enforcement may subpoena and obtain any information you give us. However, we may be able to put you in touch with lawyers who are capable of addressing your questions and/or concerns.
+Please note that we are not lawyers, and any information we give you does not constitute legal advice.
+Additionally, your communication with us is not protected by any legal privilege so law enforcement may subpoena and obtain any information you give us.
+However, we may be able to put you in touch with lawyers who are capable of addressing your questions and/or concerns.
Some relevant resources include:
-
+
* [EFF Know your rights](https://www.eff.org/issues/know-your-rights)
* [EFF Tor legal FAQ](https://community.torproject.org/relay/community-resources/eff-tor-legal-faq/)
* [OONI disclaimer](https://ooni.io/about/risks/)
diff --git a/content/user-testing/current/contents.lr b/content/user-testing/current/contents.lr
index 1d10937..d71015f 100644
--- a/content/user-testing/current/contents.lr
+++ b/content/user-testing/current/contents.lr
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ image: clipboard
---
_template: layout.html
---
-title: Currently Testing Stuffs
+title: Currently Testing Stuffs[FIXME]
---
-subtitle: Link to somewhere we csan update more than this webpage, even banners will be tedious if we do testing all the time. We can even oput some thing puilled from there and have it populated here.
+subtitle: Link to somewhere we can update more than this webpage, even banners will be tedious if we do testing all the time. We can even output some thing pulled from there and have it populated here.[FIXME]
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