[tor-commits] [community/develop] grammar, flow, and punctuation edits

[pili at torproject.org]

commit 76f2f7bfbfe4c978aa65dd742633822f016ac800
Author: Stephanie A. Whited <steph at torproject.org>
Date:   Thu Oct 31 19:21:36 2019 +0000

    grammar, flow, and punctuation edits
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 content/training/faq/contents.lr | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/training/faq/contents.lr b/content/training/faq/contents.lr
index 69a2d72..85ed923 100644
--- a/content/training/faq/contents.lr
+++ b/content/training/faq/contents.lr
@@ -4,23 +4,23 @@ title: Tor Training FAQ
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 body:
 
-After running a couple of Tor training, you will find out that first time users have some similar questions about Tor.
-Here we aggregate the most frequent questions that we listened during our training sessions and you must be aware before running your training.
-For an extensive resource check [Support portal](https://support.torproject.org).
+After running a couple of Tor trainings, you will find that first time users have some similar questions about Tor.
+These are the most frequent questions we hear during our training sessions. Be prepared for them before running your training. 
+For an extensive resource, check [Support portal](https://support.torproject.org).
 
  * [Why is it called Tor?](https://support.torproject.org/about/why-is-it-called-tor/)
  * [Does using Tor Browser protect other applications on my computer?](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-13/)
- * [Using Tor with a VPN is more secure?](https://support.torproject.org/faq/faq-5/)
- * [Can I browse normal HTTPS sites with Tor?](https://support.torproject.org/https/https-2/)
+ * [Is using Tor with a VPN more secure?](https://support.torproject.org/faq/faq-5/)
+ * [Can I browse HTTPS sites with Tor?](https://support.torproject.org/https/https-2/)
  * [Is it possible to find out the path that a client is taking on the Tor Network?](https://support.torproject.org/misc/misc-1/)
  * [Why don't you prevent bad people from doing bad things when using Tor?](https://support.torproject.org/misc/misc-2/)
  * [When I use Tor Browser, will anyone be able to tell which websites I visit?](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-3/)
  * [Why did my search engine switch to DuckDuckGo? Or what is DuckDuckGo?](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-41/)
  * [What is a bridge?](https://support.torproject.org/censorship/censorship-7/)
  * [Tor Browser won't connect, but it doesn’t seem to be an issue with censorship.](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-20/)
- * [What is the difference between using Tor Browser and 'Incognito mode' or private tabs? ](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-and-incognito-mode/)
+ * [What is the difference between using Tor Browser and 'incognito mode' or private tabs? ](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-and-incognito-mode/)
  * [Does running Tor Browser make me a relay?](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-33/)
- * [Who funds Tor](https://support.torproject.org/misc/misc-3/)
+ * [Who funds Tor?](https://support.torproject.org/misc/misc-3/)
  * [Is there a backdoor in Tor?](https://support.torproject.org/about/backdoor/)
 
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@@ -36,4 +36,4 @@ section_id: training
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 subtitle:
 
-You probably should know these answers before teaching about Tor
+People new to Tor often ask similar questions, and we can help you prepare for answering them.