[tor-commits] [community/develop] update content

[pili at torproject.org]

commit 8b765e8d11300b913673075b5a6305fcef2d3110
Author: Antonela <hola at antonela.me>
Date:   Sat Oct 19 09:59:10 2019 -0300

    update content
    
    steph's review. Close #103
    https://dip.torproject.org/steph/community/blob/develop/content/user-research/contents.lr
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 title: User Research
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-subtitle: We conduct user research while also respecting user privacy.
+subtitle: We respect our users' privacy when we conduct research.
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 cta: Learn about Tor users
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@@ -18,6 +18,6 @@ html: user-research.html
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-## We conduct user research while also respecting user privacy.
+## We respect our users' privacy when we conduct research.
 
-We practice human-centered design on building tools for internet freedom while we build community. Our user research is funded by the premises of consent, respect, and empathy. Make an impact in your local community by listening to our users. Learn how we do it and help Tor with user research.
+We practice human-centered design when we build tools for internet freedom. The way we build tools also builds community. Our user research is founded on the premises of consent, respect, and empathy. You can make an impact in your community by learning from our methods and helping us with user research.