[tor-commits] [translation/abouttor-homepage_completed] Update translations for abouttor-homepage_completed

[translation at torproject.org]

commit 86b931568951124f6bce1493fe1637dd033f59ce
Author: Translation commit bot <translation at torproject.org>
Date:   Fri May 24 23:45:14 2019 +0000

    Update translations for abouttor-homepage_completed
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 zh-CN/aboutTor.dtd | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/zh-CN/aboutTor.dtd b/zh-CN/aboutTor.dtd
index 33ea8eb43..8ddeb9d77 100644
--- a/zh-CN/aboutTor.dtd
+++ b/zh-CN/aboutTor.dtd
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.viewChangelog.label "查看更新日志">
 
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.ready.label "私密浏览">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.ready2.label "欢迎体验最私密的浏览。">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.ready2.label "您将享受世界上最私密的浏览体验。">
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.failure.label "出错了！">
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.failure2.label "Tor 无法在该浏览器下运行。">
 
@@ -27,6 +27,6 @@
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.getInvolved.link "https://www.torproject.org/getinvolved/volunteer.html.en">
 
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.newsletter.tagline "通过邮件获取 Tor 的最新消息。">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.newsletter.link_text "注册 Tor 新闻列表">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.donationBanner.line2e "让 Tor 网络保持健壮。">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.newsletter.link_text "订阅 Tor 的最新动态。">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.donationBanner.line2e "让 Tor 网络保持生机与活力。">
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.donationBanner.buttonA "现在就捐助">