[tor-commits] [donate/master] Use suggested language for the cryptocurrency thank you page

peterh at torproject.org peterh at torproject.org
Mon Mar 18 18:08:26 UTC 2019


commit 8f1346e4c1edd3cd850915f21d80058312a73550
Author: Richard Esguerra <resguerra at giantrabbit.com>
Date:   Thu Mar 14 12:29:25 2019 -0700

    Use suggested language for the cryptocurrency thank you page
    
    Mock page included revised copy text.
    
    Issue #39726
---
 templates/cryptocurrency-thank-you.twig | 4 ++--
 templates/thank-you.twig                | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/cryptocurrency-thank-you.twig b/templates/cryptocurrency-thank-you.twig
index afdd96d9..93c8aeef 100644
--- a/templates/cryptocurrency-thank-you.twig
+++ b/templates/cryptocurrency-thank-you.twig
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
     {% if isMatchingDonation %}
       <p>{% trans %}Thank you for supporting Tor's Strength in Numbers campaign.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}You should receive an email receipt shortly.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}With your support and the generous matching funds from Mozilla, we'll be able to tackle ambitious projects, such as developing a more secure, privacy-enhancing browser for mobile devices and making it easier for third-party developers to integrate Tor into their applications.{% endtrans %}</p>
     {% else %}
-      <p>{% trans %}Thank you for supporting Tor's Strength in Numbers campaign.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}You should receive an email receipt shortly.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}With your support, we'll be able to tackle ambitious projects, such as developing a more secure, privacy-enhancing browser for mobile devices and making it easier for third-party developers to integrate Tor into their applications.{% endtrans %}</p>
+      <p>{% trans %}Thank you for standing up for privacy and freedom online.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}With your gift of cryptocurrency, you're helping the Tor Project give millions of people private access to the open web.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}Your contribution helps make Tor an even stronger tool against authoritarian governments and privacy-invading corporations.{% endtrans %}</p>
     {% endif %}
-    <p>{% trans %}It's an incredible time to stand up for world-leading security and privacy software.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}Tell family, friends, and colleagues that you're supporting privacy and security with Tor!{% endtrans %}</p>
+    <p>{% trans %}For your convenience, our wallet addresses are listed below.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}Please make sure to copy the wallet addresses exactly when making your donation, as we are unable to recover funds sent to the wrong wallet.{% endtrans %}</p>
     <h5>{% trans %}SHARE THE TOR PROJECT{% endtrans %}</h5>
     <div class="share-icons">
       <a class="facebook-icon w-inline-block" href="http://www.facebook.com/sharer.php?u={{ baseUrl }}"><img class="share-icons" src="/images/FB-f-Logo__blue_114.png">
diff --git a/templates/thank-you.twig b/templates/thank-you.twig
index 97af6a82..a4810baf 100644
--- a/templates/thank-you.twig
+++ b/templates/thank-you.twig
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     {% if isMatchingDonation %}
       <p>{% trans %}Thank you for supporting Tor's Strength in Numbers campaign.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}You should receive an email receipt shortly.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}With your support and the generous matching funds from Mozilla, we'll be able to tackle ambitious projects, such as developing a more secure, privacy-enhancing browser for mobile devices and making it easier for third-party developers to integrate Tor into their applications.{% endtrans %}</p>
     {% else %}
-      <p>{% trans %}Thank you for supporting Tor's Strength in Numbers campaign.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}You should receive an email receipt shortly.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}With your support, we'll be able to tackle ambitious projects, such as developing a more secure, privacy-enhancing browser for mobile devices and making it easier for third-party developers to integrate Tor into their applications.{% endtrans %}</p>
+      <p>{% trans %}Thank you for your support of the Tor Project.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}You should receive an email receipt shortly.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}With your support, we'll be able to tackle ambitious projects, such as developing a more secure, privacy-enhancing browser for mobile devices and making it easier for third-party developers to integrate Tor into their applications.{% endtrans %}</p>
     {% endif %}
     <p>{% trans %}It's an incredible time to stand up for world-leading security and privacy software.{% endtrans %} {% trans %}Tell family, friends, and colleagues that you're supporting privacy and security with Tor!{% endtrans %}</p>
     <h5>{% trans %}SHARE THE TOR PROJECT{% endtrans %}</h5>





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