[tor-commits] [tpo/staging] better strings for l10n

emmapeel at torproject.org emmapeel at torproject.org
Sat Mar 9 04:58:35 UTC 2019


commit 6db62df1ae34bed062a8073e6e319fe95d515001
Author: emma peel <emma.peel at riseup.net>
Date:   Sat Mar 9 05:52:02 2019 +0100

    better strings for l10n
---
 content/about/contents.lr              |  4 ++--
 content/about/history/contents.lr      | 11 +++++++----
 content/about/jobs/contents.lr         |  2 +-
 content/about/people/contents.lr       |  2 +-
 content/about/reports/contents.lr      |  2 +-
 content/about/sponsors/contents.lr     |  2 +-
 content/contact/contents.lr            |  4 ++--
 content/download/contents.lr           |  4 ++--
 content/download/languages/contents.lr |  2 +-
 content/download/options/contents.lr   |  2 +-
 content/press/contents.lr              |  4 ++--
 content/thank-you/contents.lr          |  9 ++++++---
 12 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/about/contents.lr b/content/about/contents.lr
index 36890a7..a9cbf7c 100644
--- a/content/about/contents.lr
+++ b/content/about/contents.lr
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 _template: about.html
 ---
-section: about
+section: About
 ---
 section_id: about
 ---
 color: primary
 ---
-title: history
+title: History
 ---
 body:
 
diff --git a/content/about/history/contents.lr b/content/about/history/contents.lr
index cf1ec25..9589d67 100644
--- a/content/about/history/contents.lr
+++ b/content/about/history/contents.lr
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 _template: about.html
 ---
-section: about
+section: About
 ---
 section_id: about
 ---
@@ -16,11 +16,14 @@ The Tor Project, Inc, became a 501(c)3 nonprofit in 2006, but the idea of “oni
 
 **Just like Tor users, the developers, researchers, and funders who’ve made Tor possible are a diverse group of people. But all of the people who have been involved in Tor are united by a common belief: internet users should have private access to an uncensored web.**
 
-In the 1990s, the lack of security on the internet and its ability to be used for tracking and surveillance was becoming clear, and in 1995, David Goldschlag, Mike Reed, and Paul Syverson at the U.S. Naval Research Lab (NRL), asked themselves if there was a way to create internet connections that don’t reveal who is talking to whom, even to someone monitoring the network. Their answer was to create and deploy the first research designs and prototypes of onion routing.
+In the 1990s, the lack of security on the internet and its ability to be used for tracking and surveillance was becoming clear, and in 1995, David Goldschlag, Mike Reed, and Paul Syverson at the U.S. Naval Research Lab (NRL) asked themselves if there was a way to create internet connections that don’t reveal who is talking to whom, even to someone monitoring the network.
+Their answer was to create and deploy the first research designs and prototypes of onion routing.
 
-The goal of onion routing was to have a way to use the internet with as much privacy as possible, and the idea was to route traffic through multiple servers and encrypt it each step of the way. This is still a simple explanation for how Tor works today.
+The goal of onion routing was to have a way to use the internet with as much privacy as possible, and the idea was to route traffic through multiple servers and encrypt it each step of the way.
+This is still a simple explanation for how Tor works today.
 
-In the early 2000s, Roger Dingledine, a recent [Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT)](https://web.mit.edu/) graduate, began working on an NRL onion routing project with Paul Syverson. To distinguish this original work at NRL from other onion routing efforts that were starting to pop up elsewhere, Roger called the project Tor, which stood for The Onion Routing. Nick Mathewson, a classmate of Roger's at MIT, joined the project soon after.
+In the early 2000s, Roger Dingledine, a recent [Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT)](https://web.mit.edu/) graduate, began working on an NRL onion routing project with Paul Syverson.
+To distinguish this original work at NRL from other onion routing efforts that were starting to pop up elsewhere, Roger called the project Tor, which stood for The Onion Routing. Nick Mathewson, a classmate of Roger's at MIT, joined the project soon after.
 
 From its inception in the 1990s, onion routing was conceived to rely on a decentralized network. The network needed to be operated by entities with diverse interests and trust assumptions, and the software needed to be free and open to maximize transparency and separation.
 That’s why in October 2002 when the Tor network was initially deployed, its code was released under a free and open software license.
diff --git a/content/about/jobs/contents.lr b/content/about/jobs/contents.lr
index 38c41cb..7114a31 100644
--- a/content/about/jobs/contents.lr
+++ b/content/about/jobs/contents.lr
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ _model: jobs
 ---
 _template: about.html
 ---
-section: about
+section: About
 ---
 section_id: about
 ---
diff --git a/content/about/people/contents.lr b/content/about/people/contents.lr
index d9928f9..58d00f2 100644
--- a/content/about/people/contents.lr
+++ b/content/about/people/contents.lr
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ _model: people
 ---
 _template: about.html
 ---
-section: about
+section: About
 ---
 section_id: about
 ---
diff --git a/content/about/reports/contents.lr b/content/about/reports/contents.lr
index cc6e037..168dfdb 100644
--- a/content/about/reports/contents.lr
+++ b/content/about/reports/contents.lr
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 _template: about.html
 ---
-section: about
+section: About
 ---
 section_id: about
 ---
diff --git a/content/about/sponsors/contents.lr b/content/about/sponsors/contents.lr
index 4966d19..10993ed 100644
--- a/content/about/sponsors/contents.lr
+++ b/content/about/sponsors/contents.lr
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ _model: sponsors
 ---
 _template: about.html
 ---
-section: about
+section: About
 ---
 section_id: about
 ---
diff --git a/content/contact/contents.lr b/content/contact/contents.lr
index 40b9589..5cb4b15 100644
--- a/content/contact/contents.lr
+++ b/content/contact/contents.lr
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 _template: layout.html
 ---
-section: the tor project
+section: The Tor Project
 ---
 section_id: the_tor_project
 ---
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ html: contact.html
 ---
 color: primary
 ---
-title: contact
+title: Contact
 ---
 body:
 
diff --git a/content/download/contents.lr b/content/download/contents.lr
index de8f01f..79b9136 100644
--- a/content/download/contents.lr
+++ b/content/download/contents.lr
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 _template: jumbotron.html
 ---
-section: download
+section: Download
 ---
 section_id: download
 ---
@@ -8,6 +8,6 @@ html: download.html
 ---
 color: dark
 ---
-title: download
+title: Download
 ---
 body:
diff --git a/content/download/languages/contents.lr b/content/download/languages/contents.lr
index d55af50..6004c91 100644
--- a/content/download/languages/contents.lr
+++ b/content/download/languages/contents.lr
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 _template: jumbotron.html
 ---
-section: download
+section: Download
 ---
 section_id: download
 ---
diff --git a/content/download/options/contents.lr b/content/download/options/contents.lr
index eff395d..7f490e2 100644
--- a/content/download/options/contents.lr
+++ b/content/download/options/contents.lr
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 _template: jumbotron.html
 ---
-section: download
+section: Download
 ---
 section_id: download
 ---
diff --git a/content/press/contents.lr b/content/press/contents.lr
index e304e09..e47ec8b 100644
--- a/content/press/contents.lr
+++ b/content/press/contents.lr
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ _template: layout.html
 ---
 _model: press
 ---
-section: the tor project
+section: The Tor Project
 ---
 section_id: the_tor_project
 ---
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ html: press.html
 ---
 color: primary
 ---
-title: press
+title: Press
 ---
 body:
 
diff --git a/content/thank-you/contents.lr b/content/thank-you/contents.lr
index 9a2f869..3ba1f1e 100644
--- a/content/thank-you/contents.lr
+++ b/content/thank-you/contents.lr
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 _template: layout.html
 ---
-section: the tor project
+section: The Tor Project
 ---
 section_id: the_tor_project
 ---
@@ -8,8 +8,11 @@ html: thank-you.html
 ---
 color: primary
 ---
-title: success
+title: Success
 ---
 body:
 
-You’re equipped to browse freely. Tor is the strongest tool for privacy and freedom online. It is free and open source software maintained by the Tor Project and a community of volunteers worldwide. We need your help to keep Tor secure and safe for millions across the globe. [Donate Now](https://donate.torproject.org/)
+You’re equipped to browse freely.
+Tor is the strongest tool for privacy and freedom online.
+It is free and open source software maintained by the Tor Project and a community of volunteers worldwide.
+We need your help to keep Tor secure and safe for millions across the globe. [Donate Now](https://donate.torproject.org/)



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