[tor-commits] [community/master] one sentence per line, needed for localization

emmapeel at torproject.org emmapeel at torproject.org
Fri Dec 13 13:46:33 UTC 2019


commit 07fae35ad17d630b3e0e035fbc2aeacac9e00c0e
Author: emma peel <emma.peel at riseup.net>
Date:   Wed Dec 11 10:52:54 2019 +0100

    one sentence per line, needed for localization
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 .../eff-tor-legal-faq/contents.lr                  | 62 ++++++++++++++++------
 .../relays-requirements/contents.lr                |  2 +-
 content/training/best-practices/contents.lr        |  3 +-
 3 files changed, 49 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/relay-operations/community-resources/eff-tor-legal-faq/contents.lr b/content/relay-operations/community-resources/eff-tor-legal-faq/contents.lr
index acc857c..385a255 100644
--- a/content/relay-operations/community-resources/eff-tor-legal-faq/contents.lr
+++ b/content/relay-operations/community-resources/eff-tor-legal-faq/contents.lr
@@ -6,7 +6,10 @@ title: The Legal FAQ for Tor Relay Operators
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 body:
 
-NOTE: This FAQ is for informational purposes only and does not constitute legal advice. Our aim is to provide a general description of the legal issues surrounding Tor in the United States. Different factual situations and different legal jurisdictions will result in different answers to a number of questions. Therefore, please do not act on this information alone; if you have any specific legal problems, issues, or questions, seek a complete review of your situation with a lawyer licensed to practice in your jurisdiction.
+NOTE: This FAQ is for informational purposes only and does not constitute legal advice.
+Our aim is to provide a general description of the legal issues surrounding Tor in the United States.
+Different factual situations and different legal jurisdictions will result in different answers to a number of questions.
+Therefore, please do not act on this information alone; if you have any specific legal problems, issues, or questions, seek a complete review of your situation with a lawyer licensed to practice in your jurisdiction.
 
 Also, if you received this document from anywhere besides the EFF web site or https://community.torproject.org/relay/community-resources/eff-tor-legal-faq, it may be out of date. Follow the link to get the latest version.
 
@@ -24,25 +27,36 @@ Got a DMCA notice? Check out our [sample response letter](/relay/community-resou
 
 ### Can EFF promise that I won't get in trouble for running a Tor relay?
 
-**No**. All new technologies create legal uncertainties, and Tor is no exception. We cannot guarantee that you will never face any legal liability as a result of running a Tor relay. However, EFF believes so strongly that those running Tor relays shouldn't be liable for traffic that passes through the relay that we're running our own middle relay.
+**No**. All new technologies create legal uncertainties, and Tor is no exception.
+We cannot guarantee that you will never face any legal liability as a result of running a Tor relay.
+However, EFF believes so strongly that those running Tor relays shouldn't be liable for traffic that passes through the relay that we're running our own middle relay.
 
 ### Will EFF represent me if I get in trouble for running a Tor relay?
 
-**Maybe**. While EFF cannot promise legal representation for all Tor relay operators, it will assist relay operators in assessing the situation and will try to locate qualified legal counsel when necessary. Inquiries to EFF for the purpose of securing legal representation or referrals should be directed to our intake coordinator by sending an email to info at eff.org . Such inquiries will be kept confidential subject to the limits of the attorney/client privilege. Note that although EFF cannot practice law outside of the United States, it will still try to assist non-U.S. relay operators in finding local representation.
+**Maybe**. While EFF cannot promise legal representation for all Tor relay operators, it will assist relay operators in assessing the situation and will try to locate qualified legal counsel when necessary.
+Inquiries to EFF for the purpose of securing legal representation or referrals should be directed to our intake coordinator by sending an email to info at eff.org.
+Such inquiries will be kept confidential subject to the limits of the attorney/client privilege.
+Note that although EFF cannot practice law outside of the United States, it will still try to assist non-U.S. relay operators in finding local representation.
 
 ### Should I contact the Tor developers when I have legal questions about Tor or to inform them if I suspect Tor is being used for illegal purposes?
 
-**No**. Tor's developers are available to answer technical questions, but they are not lawyers and cannot give legal advice. Nor do they have any ability to prevent illegal activity that may occur through Tor relays. Furthermore, your communications with Tor's developers are not protected by any legal privilege, so law enforcement or civil litigants could subpoena and obtain any information you give to them.
+**No**. Tor's developers are available to answer technical questions, but they are not lawyers and cannot give legal advice. Nor do they have any ability to prevent illegal activity that may occur through Tor relays.
+Furthermore, your communications with Tor's developers are not protected by any legal privilege, so law enforcement or civil litigants could subpoena and obtain any information you give to them.
 
 You can contact info at eff.org if you face a specific legal issue. We will try to assist you, but given EFF's small size, we cannot guarantee that we can help everyone.
 
 ### Do Tor's core developers make any promises about the trustworthiness or reliability of Tor relays that are listed in their directory?
 
-**No**. Although the developers attempt to verify that Tor relays listed in the directory maintained by the core developers are stable and have adequate bandwidth, neither they nor EFF can guarantee the personal trustworthiness or reliability of the individuals who run those relays. Tor's core developers further reserve the right to refuse a Tor relay operator's request to be listed in their directory or to remove any relay from their directory for any reason.
+**No**. Although the developers attempt to verify that Tor relays listed in the directory maintained by the core developers are stable and have adequate bandwidth, neither they nor EFF can guarantee the personal trustworthiness or reliability of the individuals who run those relays.
+Tor's core developers further reserve the right to refuse a Tor relay operator's request to be listed in their directory or to remove any relay from their directory for any reason.
 
 ## Exit Relays
 
-Exit relays raise special concerns because the traffic that exits from them can be traced back to the relay's IP address. While we believe that running an exit relay is legal, it is statistically likely that an exit relay will at some point be used for illegal purposes, which may attract the attention of private litigants or law enforcement. An exit relay may forward traffic that is considered unlawful, and that traffic may be attributed to the operator of a relay. If you are not willing to deal with that risk, a bridge or middle relay may be a better fit for you. These relays do not directly forward traffic to the Internet and so can't be easily mistaken for the origin of allegedly unlawful content.
+Exit relays raise special concerns because the traffic that exits from them can be traced back to the relay's IP address.
+While we believe that running an exit relay is legal, it is statistically likely that an exit relay will at some point be used for illegal purposes, which may attract the attention of private litigants or law enforcement.
+An exit relay may forward traffic that is considered unlawful, and that traffic may be attributed to the operator of a relay.
+If you are not willing to deal with that risk, a bridge or middle relay may be a better fit for you.
+These relays do not directly forward traffic to the Internet and so can't be easily mistaken for the origin of allegedly unlawful content.
 
 The Tor Project's blog has some excellent [recommendations](https://blog.torproject.org/blog/tips-running-exit-node) for running an exit with as little risk as possible. We suggest that you review their advice before setting up an exit relay.
 
@@ -56,27 +70,38 @@ Of course, you should avoid keeping any sensitive or personal information on the
 
 ### Should I tell my ISP that I'm running an exit relay?
 
-**Yes**. Make sure you have a Tor-friendly ISP that knows you're running an exit relay and supports you in that goal. This will help ensure that your Internet access isn't cut off due to abuse complaints. The Tor community maintains a list of ISPs that are particularly Tor-savvy, as well as ones that aren't.
+**Yes**. Make sure you have a Tor-friendly ISP that knows you're running an exit relay and supports you in that goal.
+This will help ensure that your Internet access isn't cut off due to abuse complaints.
+The Tor community maintains a list of ISPs that are particularly Tor-savvy, as well as ones that aren't.
 
 ### Is it a good idea to let others know that I'm running an exit relay?
 
-**Yes**. Be as transparent as possible about the fact that you're running an exit relay. If your exit traffic draws the attention of the government or disgruntled private party, you want them to figure out quickly and easily that you are part of the Tor network and not responsible for the content. This could mean the difference between having your computer seized by law enforcement and being left alone.
+**Yes**. Be as transparent as possible about the fact that you're running an exit relay.
+If your exit traffic draws the attention of the government or disgruntled private party, you want them to figure out quickly and easily that you are part of the Tor network and not responsible for the content.
+This could mean the difference between having your computer seized by law enforcement and being left alone.
 
 The Tor Project [suggests](https://blog.torproject.org/blog/tips-running-exit-node) the following ways to let others know that you're running an exit relay:
 
  *  Set up a reverse DNS name for the IP address that makes clear that the computer is an exit relay.
  *  Set up a notice like [this](https://blog.torproject.org/blog/tips-running-exit-node) to explain that you're running an exit relay that's part of the Tor network.
- * If possible, get an [ARIN](https://www.arin.net/) registration for your exit relay that displays contact information for you, not your ISP. This way, you'll receive any abuse complaints and can respond to them directly. Otherwise, try to ensure that your ISP forwards abuse complaints that it receives to you.
+ *  If possible, get an [ARIN](https://www.arin.net/) registration for your exit relay that displays contact information for you, not your ISP.
+    This way, you'll receive any abuse complaints and can respond to them directly. Otherwise, try to ensure that your ISP forwards abuse complaints that it receives to you.
 
 ###  Should I snoop on the plaintext traffic that exits through my Tor relay?
 
-**No**. You may be technically capable of modifying the Tor source code or installing additional software to monitor or log plaintext that exits your relay. However, Tor relay operators in the United States can possibly create civil and even criminal liability for themselves under state or federal wiretap laws if they monitor, log, or disclose Tor users' communications, while non-U.S. operators may be subject to similar laws. Do not examine anyone's communications without first talking to a lawyer.
+**No**. You may be technically capable of modifying the Tor source code or installing additional software to monitor or log plaintext that exits your relay.
+However, Tor relay operators in the United States can possibly create civil and even criminal liability for themselves under state or federal wiretap laws if they monitor, log, or disclose Tor users' communications, while non-U.S. operators may be subject to similar laws.
+Do not examine anyone's communications without first talking to a lawyer.
 
 ### If I receive a subpoena or other information request from law enforcement or anyone else related to my Tor relay, what should I do?
 
-**Educate them about Tor**. In most instances, properly configured Tor relays will have no useful data for inquiring parties, and you should feel free to educate them on this point. To the extent you do maintain logs, however, you should not disclose them to any third party without first consulting a lawyer. In the United States, such a disclosure may violate the Electronic Communications Privacy Act, and relay operators outside of the United States may be subject to similar data protection laws.
+**Educate them about Tor**. In most instances, properly configured Tor relays will have no useful data for inquiring parties, and you should feel free to educate them on this point.
+To the extent you do maintain logs, however, you should not disclose them to any third party without first consulting a lawyer.
+In the United States, such a disclosure may violate the Electronic Communications Privacy Act, and relay operators outside of the United States may be subject to similar data protection laws.
 
-You may receive legal inquiries where you are prohibited by law from telling anyone about the request. We believe that, at least in the United States, such gag orders do not prevent you from talking to a lawyer, including calling a lawyer to find representation. Inquiries to EFF for the purpose of securing legal representation should be directed to our intake coordinator (info at eff.org) Such inquiries will be kept confidential subject to the limits of the attorney/client privilege.
+You may receive legal inquiries where you are prohibited by law from telling anyone about the request. We believe that, at least in the United States, such gag orders do not prevent you from talking to a lawyer, including calling a lawyer to find representation.
+Inquiries to EFF for the purpose of securing legal representation should be directed to our intake coordinator (info at eff.org).
+Such inquiries will be kept confidential subject to the limits of the attorney/client privilege.
 
 For more information about responding to abuse complaints and other inquiries, check out the [Tor Abuse FAQ](https://2019.www.torproject.org/docs/faq-abuse.html.en) and the collection of [abuse response templates](/tor-abuse-templates/) on the Tor Project's website.
 
@@ -84,13 +109,18 @@ For information on what to do if law enforcement seeks access to your digital de
 
 ### My ISP, university, etc. just sent me a DMCA notice. What should I do?
 
-EFF has written a [short template](tor-dmca-response) to help you write a response to your ISP, university, etc., to let them know about the details of the Digital Millennium Copyright Act's safe harbor, and how Tor fits in. Note that template only refers to U.S. jurisdictions, and is intended only to address copyright complaints that are based on a relay of allegedly infringing material through the Tor node.
+EFF has written a [short template](tor-dmca-response) to help you write a response to your ISP, university, etc., to let them know about the details of the Digital Millennium Copyright Act's safe harbor, and how Tor fits in.
+Note that template only refers to U.S. jurisdictions, and is intended only to address copyright complaints that are based on a relay of allegedly infringing material through the Tor node.
 
-If you like, you should consider submitting a copy of your notice to [Chilling Effects](https://www.chillingeffects.org/). This will help us recognize trends and issues that the lawyers might want to focus on. Chilling Effects encourages submissions from people outside the United States too.
+If you like, you should consider submitting a copy of your notice to [Chilling Effects](https://www.chillingeffects.org/).
+This will help us recognize trends and issues that the lawyers might want to focus on. Chilling Effects encourages submissions from people outside the United States too.
 
-EFF believes that Tor relays should be protected from copyright liability for the acts of their users because a Tor relay operator can raise an immunity defense under the DMCA as well as defenses under copyright's secondary liability doctrines. However, no court has yet addressed these issues in the context of Tor itself. If you are uncomfortable with this uncertainty, you may consider using a reduced exit policy (such as the default policy suggested by the Tor Project) to try to minimize traffic types that are often targeted in copyright complaints.
+EFF believes that Tor relays should be protected from copyright liability for the acts of their users because a Tor relay operator can raise an immunity defense under the DMCA as well as defenses under copyright's secondary liability doctrines.
+However, no court has yet addressed these issues in the context of Tor itself.
+If you are uncomfortable with this uncertainty, you may consider using a reduced exit policy (such as the default policy suggested by the Tor Project) to try to minimize traffic types that are often targeted in copyright complaints.
 
-If you are a Tor relay operator willing to stand up and help set a clear legal precedent establishing that merely running a relay does not create copyright liability for either operators or their bandwidth providers, EFF is interested in hearing from you. Read more [here](https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-talk/2005-October/016301.html) about being EFF's test case.
+If you are a Tor relay operator willing to stand up and help set a clear legal precedent establishing that merely running a relay does not create copyright liability for either operators or their bandwidth providers, EFF is interested in hearing from you.
+Read more [here](https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-talk/2005-October/016301.html) about being EFF's test case.
 
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diff --git a/content/relay-operations/relays-requirements/contents.lr b/content/relay-operations/relays-requirements/contents.lr
index 0c1808e..5ad16cc 100644
--- a/content/relay-operations/relays-requirements/contents.lr
+++ b/content/relay-operations/relays-requirements/contents.lr
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ _template: layout.html
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 title: Relay requirements
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-subtitle: Requirements for Tor relays depend on the type of relay and the bandwidth they provide.  Learn more about specific relay requirements.
+subtitle: Requirements for Tor relays depend on the type of relay and the bandwidth they provide. Learn more about specific relay requirements.
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diff --git a/content/training/best-practices/contents.lr b/content/training/best-practices/contents.lr
index 19c7946..91bb2dd 100644
--- a/content/training/best-practices/contents.lr
+++ b/content/training/best-practices/contents.lr
@@ -48,7 +48,8 @@ Once you've answered those questions, you're ready to plan your training!
    This includes downloads and PDFs of handouts.
    You'll share this link list on a whiteboard or project it at the training.
 6. Determine how you'll do hands-on assistance at your training.
-   Will you be able to handle this alone? Or will you require partners? If you need more help, make sure the partners you're bringing in are aware of the safety needs of the community, and communicate with your contacts in the community to make sure they're okay with you bringing in additional trainers.
+   Will you be able to handle this alone? Or will you require partners?
+   If you need more help, make sure the partners you're bringing in are aware of the safety needs of the community, and communicate with your contacts in the community to make sure they're okay with you bringing in additional trainers.
 7. Make sure your presentation is up-to-date (both information and screenshots) and save your presentation in two file formats -- for example, odp and pdf -- and on at least one additional device -- for example, on your computer and on a USB stick.
 8. Decide how you will facilitate a safer space. We recommend using the [Tor Code of Conduct](/training/code-of-conduct/).
 



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