[tor-commits] [user-manual/master] Formatting and text revisions

[colin at torproject.org]

commit e140a133b04b086f7fd81eb12da10b446d0199fb
Author: har00ga <jaruga at dial.ga>
Date:   Tue Aug 14 00:20:31 2018 +0000

    Formatting and text revisions
---
 C/circumvention.page | 2 +-
 C/downloading.page   | 4 ++--
 C/onionsites.page    | 4 ++--
 C/plugins.page       | 5 +++--
 4 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/C/circumvention.page b/C/circumvention.page
index d46e876..c443db3 100644
--- a/C/circumvention.page
+++ b/C/circumvention.page
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ individual circumstances.
 <p>
 If you are trying to circumvent a blocked connection for the first time,
 you should try the different transports: obfs3, obfs4, ScrambleSuit, fte,
-meek-azure, meek-amazon.
+meek-azure and Snowflake.
 </p>
 <p>
 If you try all of these options, and none of them gets you online,
diff --git a/C/downloading.page b/C/downloading.page
index 54f78a1..3215c90 100644
--- a/C/downloading.page
+++ b/C/downloading.page
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ below.
  <p>
  GetTor is a service that automatically responds to messages with links
  to the latest version of Tor Browser, hosted at a  variety of locations,
- such as Dropbox, Google Drive and Github..
+ such as Dropbox, Google Drive and GitHub.
  </p>
 
  <p>
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ below.
  </steps>
 
  <p>
- To use GetTor via Jabber/XMPP (Tor Messenger, Jitsi, CoyIM):
+ To use GetTor via Jabber/XMPP (Jitsi, CoyIM, etc.):
  </p>
  <steps>
   <item>
diff --git a/C/onionsites.page b/C/onionsites.page
index 4cbc75a..066a718 100644
--- a/C/onionsites.page
+++ b/C/onionsites.page
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ non-private web:
 <p>
 Just like any other website, you will need to know the address of an
 onion service in order to connect to it. An onion address is a string of
-sixteen mostly random letters and numbers, followed by “.onion”.
+16 (and in V3 format, 56) mostly random letters and numbers, followed by “.onion”.
 </p>
 </section>
 
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ sixteen mostly random letters and numbers, followed by “.onion”.
 <title>Troubleshooting</title>
 <p>
 If you cannot reach the onion service you require, make sure that you have
-entered the 16-character onion address correctly: even a small mistake
+entered the onion address correctly: even a small mistake
 will stop Tor Browser from being able to reach the site.
 </p>
 <p>
diff --git a/C/plugins.page b/C/plugins.page
index 0f68a80..db4fe04 100644
--- a/C/plugins.page
+++ b/C/plugins.page
@@ -38,8 +38,9 @@ security of the browser, which might lead to deanonymization.
 
 <p>
 Tor Browser includes an add-on called NoScript, accessed through the
-“S” icon at the top-left of the window, which allows you to control the
-JavaScript that runs on individual web pages, or to block it entirely.
+“S” icon at the top-left of the window. NoScript allows you to control the
+JavaScript (and other scripts) that runs on individual web pages, or 
+block it entirely.
 </p>
 <p>
 <media type="image" width="400" src="media/plugins/noscript_menu.png" />