[tor-commits] [torspec/master] simplify confusing sentence

[arma at torproject.org]

commit 8e2035bfcd97c6ddf36ea7cb4e442c7b9456526a
Author: Roger Dingledine <arma at torproject.org>
Date:   Wed Aug 22 22:36:26 2018 -0400

    simplify confusing sentence
---
 proposals/247-hs-guard-discovery.txt | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/proposals/247-hs-guard-discovery.txt b/proposals/247-hs-guard-discovery.txt
index 0cc5137..c3a97b0 100644
--- a/proposals/247-hs-guard-discovery.txt
+++ b/proposals/247-hs-guard-discovery.txt
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ analysis and experiences while implementing and simulating the vanguard design.]
   an improvement over the current state where the Sybil attack is
   trivial to pull off, and only a single compromise attack is required.
 
-  With this new path selection, an attacker is forced to do a one or
-  more node compromise attacks before learning the guard node of a hidden
+  With this new path selection, an attacker is forced to
+  compromise one or more nodes before learning the guard node of a hidden
   service. This increases the uncertainty of the attacker, since
   compromise attacks are costly and potentially detectable, so an
   attacker will have to think twice before beginning a chain of node