[tor-commits] [translation/abouttor-homepage_completed] Update translations for abouttor-homepage_completed

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commit 0a9b734156061e0085148432f7edd994a184a7ac
Author: Translation commit bot <translation at torproject.org>
Date:   Wed Aug 15 01:46:19 2018 +0000

    Update translations for abouttor-homepage_completed
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 en/aboutTor.dtd | 42 +++++++++++-------------------------------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en/aboutTor.dtd b/en/aboutTor.dtd
index 676878e27..3eecc0bcd 100644
--- a/en/aboutTor.dtd
+++ b/en/aboutTor.dtd
@@ -1,45 +1,25 @@
 <!--
-   - Copyright (c) 2015, The Tor Project, Inc.
+   - Copyright (c) 2018, The Tor Project, Inc.
    - See LICENSE for licensing information.
    - vim: set sw=2 sts=2 ts=8 et syntax=xml:
   -->
 
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.title "About Tor">
 
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.outOfDateTorOn.label "WARNING: this browser is out of date.">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.outOfDateTorOff.label "ALSO, this browser is out of date.">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.outOfDate2.label "Click on the onion and then choose Check for Tor Browser Update.">
-
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.check.label "Test Tor Network Settings">
-
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.success.label "Welcome to Tor Browser">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.success2.label "Connected to the Tor network.">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.success3.label "You are now free to browse the Internet anonymously.">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.ready.label "Explore. Privately.">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.ready2.label "You’re ready for the world’s most private browsing experience.">
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.failure.label "Something Went Wrong!">
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.failure2.label "Tor is not working in this browser.">
 
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.search.label "Search">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.search.label "Search with DuckDuckGo">
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.searchDDGPost.link "https://duckduckgo.com">
 
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.torInfo1.label "Additional Info:">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.torInfo2.label "Country & IP Address:">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.torInfo3.label "Exit Node:">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.torInfo4.label "This server does not log any information about visitors.">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.whatnextQuestion.label "What Next?">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.whatnextAnswer.label "Tor is NOT all you need to browse anonymously! You may need to change some of your browsing habits to ensure your identity stays safe.">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.whatnext.label "Tips On Staying Anonymous »">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.whatnext.link "https://www.torproject.org/download/download.html.en#warning">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.torbrowser_user_manual_questions.label "Questions?">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.torbrowser_user_manual_link.label "Check our Tor Browser Manual »">
+<!-- The next two entities are used within the browser's Help menu. -->
 <!ENTITY aboutTor.torbrowser_user_manual.accesskey "M">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.torbrowser_user_manual.label "Tor Browser User Manual">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.helpInfo1.label "You Can Help!">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.helpInfo2.label "There are many ways you can help make the Tor Network faster and stronger:">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.helpInfo3.label "Run a Tor Relay Node »">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.helpInfo3.link "https://www.torproject.org/docs/tor-doc-relay.html.en">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.helpInfo4.label "Volunteer Your Services »">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.helpInfo4.link "https://www.torproject.org/getinvolved/volunteer.html.en">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.helpInfo5.label "Make a Donation »">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.helpInfo5.link "https://www.torproject.org/donate/donate.html.en">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.torbrowser_user_manual.label "Tor Browser Manual">
 
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.footer.label "The Tor Project is a US 501(c)(3) non-profit dedicated to the research, development, and education of online anonymity and privacy.">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.learnMore.label "Learn more about The Tor Project »">
-<!ENTITY aboutTor.learnMore.link "https://www.torproject.org/about/overview.html.en">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.tor_mission.label "The Tor Project is a US 501(c)(3) non-profit organization advancing human rights and freedoms by creating and deploying free and open source anonymity and privacy technologies, supporting their unrestricted availability and use, and furthering their scientific and popular understanding.">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.getInvolved.label "Get Involved »">
+<!ENTITY aboutTor.getInvolved.link "https://www.torproject.org/getinvolved/volunteer.html.en">