[tor-commits] [metrics-web/master] Tweak webstats graph descriptions.

[karsten at torproject.org]

commit 08ee5d3f3f5ffbc5b2b1f18d489e3bebf08ad56f
Author: Karsten Loesing <karsten.loesing at gmx.net>
Date:   Fri Feb 3 15:44:38 2017 +0100

    Tweak webstats graph descriptions.
---
 website/etc/categories.json | 2 +-
 website/etc/metrics.json    | 8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/etc/categories.json b/website/etc/categories.json
index de10ceb..acd0614 100644
--- a/website/etc/categories.json
+++ b/website/etc/categories.json
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
     "icon": "fa-download",
     "header": "Applications",
     "summary": "How many Tor applications, like Tor Browser, have been downloaded or updated.",
-    "description": "The following application statistics are based on the analysis of requests to <code>torproject.org</code> web servers.",
+    "description": "The following application statistics are based on the analysis of web server requests. All data comes from <a href=\"https://webstats.torproject.org/\" target=\"_blank\"><code>webstats.torproject.org</code></a> which collects logs from <code>torproject.org</code> web servers and provides them as a stripped-down version of Apache's \"combined\" log format without IP addresses, log times, HTTP parameters, referers, and user agent strings.",
     "metrics": [
       "webstats-tb",
       "webstats-tb-platform",
diff --git a/website/etc/metrics.json b/website/etc/metrics.json
index 2af4bf6..3eb000c 100644
--- a/website/etc/metrics.json
+++ b/website/etc/metrics.json
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@
     "id": "webstats-tb",
     "title": "Tor Browser downloads and updates",
     "type": "Graph",
-    "description": "<p>This graph shows absolute numbers of requests to Tor's web servers by request type.  It is based on data from <a href=\"https://webstats.torproject.org/\" target=\"_blank\"><code>webstats.torproject.org</code></a> which collects logs from <code>torproject.org</code> web servers and provides them as a stripped-down version of Apache's \"combined\" log format without IP addresses, log times, HTTP parameters, referers, and user agent strings.  <em>Initial downloads</em> and <em>signature downloads</em> are requests made by the user to download a Tor Browser executable or a corresponding signature file from the Tor website.  <em>Update pings</em> and <em>update requests</em> are requests made by Tor Browser to check whether a newer version is available or to download a newer version.</p>",
+    "description": "<p>This graph shows absolute numbers of requests to Tor's web servers related to Tor Browser.  <em>Initial downloads</em> and <em>signature downloads</em> are requests made by the user to download a Tor Browser executable or a corresponding signature file from the Tor website.  <em>Update pings</em> and <em>update requests</em> are requests made by Tor Browser to check whether a newer version is available or to download a newer version.</p>",
     "function": "plot_webstats_tb",
     "parameters": [
       "start",
@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@
     "id": "webstats-tb-platform",
     "title": "Tor Browser downloads by platform",
     "type": "Graph",
-    "description": "<p>This graph shows absolute numbers of requests to Tor's web servers by request type.  It is based on data from <a href=\"https://webstats.torproject.org/\" target=\"_blank\"><code>webstats.torproject.org</code></a> which collects logs from <code>torproject.org</code> web servers and provides them as a stripped-down version of Apache's \"combined\" log format without IP addresses, log times, HTTP parameters, referers, and user agent strings.  All shown requests are requests made by the user to download a Tor Browser executable from the Tor website, broken down by platform of the requested executable.</p>",
+    "description": "<p>This graph shows absolute numbers of requests to Tor's web servers to download a Tor Browser executable, broken down by platform (Windows, Mac, Linux) of the requested executable.</p>",
     "function": "plot_webstats_tb_platform",
     "parameters": [
       "start",
@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@
     "id": "webstats-tb-locale",
     "title": "Tor Browser downloads by locale",
     "type": "Graph",
-    "description": "<p>This graph shows absolute numbers of requests to Tor's web servers by request type.  It is based on data from <a href=\"https://webstats.torproject.org/\" target=\"_blank\"><code>webstats.torproject.org</code></a> which collects logs from <code>torproject.org</code> web servers and provides them as a stripped-down version of Apache's \"combined\" log format without IP addresses, log times, HTTP parameters, referers, and user agent strings.  All shown requests are requests made by the user to download a Tor Browser executable from the Tor website, broken down by requested locale.</p>",
+    "description": "<p>This graph shows absolute numbers of requests to Tor's web servers to download a Tor Browser executable, broken down by requested locale.</p>",
     "function": "plot_webstats_tb_locale",
     "parameters": [
       "start",
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@
     "id": "webstats-tm",
     "title": "Tor Messenger downloads and updates",
     "type": "Graph",
-    "description": "<p>This graph shows absolute numbers of requests to Tor's web servers by request type.  It is based on data from <a href=\"https://webstats.torproject.org/\" target=\"_blank\"><code>webstats.torproject.org</code></a> which collects logs from <code>torproject.org</code> web servers and provides them as a stripped-down version of Apache's \"combined\" log format without IP addresses, log times, HTTP parameters, referers, and user agent strings.  <em>Initial downloads</em> are requests made by the user to download a Tor Messenger executable from the Tor website.  <em>Update pings</em> are requests made by Tor Messenger to check whether a newer version is available.</p>",
+    "description": "<p>This graph shows absolute numbers of requests to Tor's web servers related to Tor Messenger.  <em>Initial downloads</em> are requests made by the user to download a Tor Messenger executable from the Tor website.  <em>Update pings</em> are requests made by Tor Messenger to check whether a newer version is available.</p>",
     "function": "plot_webstats_tm",
     "parameters": [
       "start",