[tor-commits] [exonerator/master] Tweak English text.

karsten at torproject.org karsten at torproject.org
Fri Sep 23 08:22:20 UTC 2016


commit a1dd592a488d16f108fdf381a64f2333bef7a2dc
Author: Karsten Loesing <karsten.loesing at gmx.net>
Date:   Fri Sep 23 10:12:14 2016 +0200

    Tweak English text.
    
    Fix typo "ant" to "and" and add   to the end of all sentences.
    
    Both tweaks suggested by John Lorenz.
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 res/ExoneraTor.properties | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/res/ExoneraTor.properties b/res/ExoneraTor.properties
index 50d70c7..6fa3081 100644
--- a/res/ExoneraTor.properties
+++ b/res/ExoneraTor.properties
@@ -41,12 +41,12 @@ technicaldetails.exit.yes=Yes
 technicaldetails.exit.no=No
 permanentlink.heading=Permanent link
 footer.abouttor.heading=About Tor
-footer.abouttor.body.text=Tor is an international software project to anonymize Internet traffic by %s. Therefore, if you see traffic from a Tor relay, this traffic usually originates from someone using Tor, rather than from the relay operator. The Tor Project and Tor relay operators have no records of the traffic that passes over the network ant therefore cannot provide any information about its origin. Be sure to %s, and don't hesitate to %s for more information.
+footer.abouttor.body.text=Tor is an international software project to anonymize Internet traffic by %s.  Therefore, if you see traffic from a Tor relay, this traffic usually originates from someone using Tor, rather than from the relay operator.  The Tor Project and Tor relay operators have no records of the traffic that passes over the network and therefore cannot provide any information about its origin.  Be sure to %s, and don't hesitate to %s for more information.
 footer.abouttor.body.link1=encrypting packets and sending them through a series of hops before they reach their destination
 footer.abouttor.body.link2=learn more about Tor
 footer.abouttor.body.link3=contact The Tor Project, Inc.
 footer.aboutexonerator.heading=About ExoneraTor
-footer.aboutexonerator.body=The ExoneraTor service maintains a database of IP addresses that have been part of the Tor network. It answers the question whether there was a Tor relay running on a given IP address on a given date. ExoneraTor may store more than one IP address per relay if relays use a different IP address for exiting to the Internet than for registering in the Tor network, and it stores whether a relay permitted transit of Tor traffic to the open Internet at that time.
+footer.aboutexonerator.body=The ExoneraTor service maintains a database of IP addresses that have been part of the Tor network.  It answers the question whether there was a Tor relay running on a given IP address on a given date.  ExoneraTor may store more than one IP address per relay if relays use a different IP address for exiting to the Internet than for registering in the Tor network, and it stores whether a relay permitted transit of Tor traffic to the open Internet at that time.
 footer.trademark.text="Tor" and the "Onion Logo" are %s of The Tor Project, Inc.
 footer.trademark.link=registered trademarks
 



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