[tor-commits] [tor-browser-spec/master] Minor phrase fixes.

[mikeperry at torproject.org]

commit c90ea472b7a3e5b14380daa805dbb74b8fca1291
Author: Mike Perry <mikeperry-git at torproject.org>
Date:   Fri Oct 31 23:01:51 2014 -0700

    Minor phrase fixes.
---
 design-doc/design.xml |   10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/design-doc/design.xml b/design-doc/design.xml
index 9ff1b89..914a84d 100644
--- a/design-doc/design.xml
+++ b/design-doc/design.xml
@@ -1927,12 +1927,12 @@ fingerprint configuration and user-specific information.
      </para>
      <para><command>Implementation Status:</command>
 
-We have no defenses deployed that address OS type fingerprinting, but nothing
-else. Several defenses may help also mitigate it, in addition to reducing a
-lot more entropy elsewhere. You can see the major areas of OS fingerprinting
-we're aware of using the tag <ulink
+We have no defenses deployed that address OS type fingerprinting by itself.
+Several defenses may help also mitigate it, in addition to reducing a lot more
+entropy elsewhere. You can see the major areas of OS fingerprinting we're
+aware of using the <ulink
 url="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/query?keywords=~tbb-fingerprinting-os">tbb-fingerprinting-os
-on our bugtracker</ulink>.
+tag on our bugtracker</ulink>.
 
      </para>
     </listitem>