[tor-commits] r26811: {website} get rid of the redundant "after it's working" sections of th (website/trunk/docs/en)

[Roger Dingledine]

Author: arma
Date: 2014-06-05 20:03:14 +0000 (Thu, 05 Jun 2014)
New Revision: 26811

Modified:
   website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-relay.wml
   website/trunk/docs/en/tor-relay-debian.wml
Log:
get rid of the redundant "after it's working" sections of the two relay pages


Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-relay.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-relay.wml	2014-06-05 19:50:45 UTC (rev 26810)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-relay.wml	2014-06-05 20:03:14 UTC (rev 26811)
@@ -184,55 +184,16 @@
     <h2><a class="anchor" href="#after">Once your relay is working</a></h2>
     <br>
 
-    <p>Subscribe to the <a
-    href="https://lists.torproject.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/tor-announce">tor-announce</a>
-    mailing list. It is very low volume, and it will keep you informed
-    of new stable releases.</p>
-
-    <p>As a relay operator, you should consider subscribing to the
-    <a href="https://lists.torproject.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/tor-relays">
-    tor-relays mailing list</a>. You might find <a
-    href="<page docs/documentation>#MailingLists">other higher-volume
-    Tor lists</a> of interest to you as well.
+    <p>To learn more about the proper care and feeding for your relay,
+    see the advice on the <a href=<page docs/tor-relay-debian>#after>Tor
+    relay on Debian/Ubuntu</a> page.
     </p>
 
-    <p><a href="https://weather.torproject.org/">Tor Weather</a> provides
-    an email notification service to any users who want to monitor the
-    status of a Tor node. Upon subscribing, you can specify what types of
-    alerts you would like to receive. The main purpose of Tor Weather is
-    to notify node operators via email if their node is down for longer
-    than a specified period, but other notification types are available.
-    </p>
-
-    <p>Read
-    <a href="<wiki>doc/OperationalSecurity">about operational security</a>
-    to get ideas how you can increase the security of your relay.
-    </p>
-
-    <p>
-    If you control the name servers for your domain, consider setting your
-    reverse DNS hostname to 'anonymous-relay', 'proxy' or 'tor-proxy', so when
-    other people see the address in their web logs, they will more quickly
-    understand what's going on. Adding the <a
-    href="<gitblob>contrib/operator-tools/tor-exit-notice.html">Tor
-    exit notice</a> on a vhost for this name can go a long way to deterring abuse
-    complaints to you and your ISP if you are running an exit node.
-    </p>
-
-    <p>
-    When you change your Tor configuration, remember to verify that your
-    relay still works correctly after the change.
-    If you have problems or questions, see
-    the <a href="<page docs/documentation>#Support">Support</a> section or
-    <a href="<page about/contact>">contact us</a>. Thanks
-    for helping to make the Tor network grow!
-    </p>
-
-
     <hr>
 
     <p>If you have suggestions for improving this document, please <a
-    href="<page about/contact>">send them to us</a>. Thanks!</p>
+    href="<page about/contact>">send them to us</a>. Thanks
+    for helping to make the Tor network grow!</p>
   </div>
   <!-- END MAINCOL -->
   <div id = "sidecol">

Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/tor-relay-debian.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/tor-relay-debian.wml	2014-06-05 19:50:45 UTC (rev 26810)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/tor-relay-debian.wml	2014-06-05 20:03:14 UTC (rev 26811)
@@ -131,16 +131,24 @@
     </p>
 
     <p>
-    9. If you run an exit relay (great!), don't miss out on our <a href="<wiki>doc/TorExitGuidelines">Exit Guidelines</a>.
+    9. If you run an exit relay (great!), don't miss out on our <a
+    href="<wiki>doc/TorExitGuidelines">Exit Guidelines</a>, including
+    setting your reverse DNS hostname to make it obvious that you're
+    a Tor exit relay, and serving the <a
+    href="<gitblob>contrib/operator-tools/tor-exit-notice.html">Tor
+    exit notice</a> page on your DirPort.
     </p>
 
     <p>
     10. Subscribe to the <a
     href="https://lists.torproject.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/tor-announce">tor-announce</a>
     mailing list. It is very low volume, and it will keep you informed
-    of new stable releases. You might also consider subscribing to <a
-    href="<page docs/documentation>#MailingLists">the higher-volume Tor lists</a>
-    too (especially tor-relays).
+    of new stable releases.
+    As a relay operator, you should consider subscribing to the
+    <a href="https://lists.torproject.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/tor-relays">
+    tor-relays mailing list</a> too.
+    We have more <a href="<page docs/documentation>#MailingLists">mailing
+    lists</a> as well.
     </p>
 
     <p>
@@ -175,6 +183,11 @@
     in (so your user is actually in the group), and run "arm".
     </p>
 
+    <p>
+    15. When you change your Tor configuration, remember to verify that
+    your relay still works correctly after the change.
+    </p>
+
     <hr>
 
     <p>If you have suggestions for improving this document, please <a