[tor-commits] [translation/tsum_completed] Update translations for tsum_completed

Wed Feb 6 08:15:37 UTC 2013

commit 9f755d3502db9936c440d008885c7288f7c37f62
Author: Translation commit bot <translation at torproject.org>
Date:   Wed Feb 6 08:15:36 2013 +0000

    Update translations for tsum_completed
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diff --git a/en/short-user-manual_en_noimg.xhtml b/en/short-user-manual_en_noimg.xhtml
index 649e71c..681e5b7 100644
--- a/en/short-user-manual_en_noimg.xhtml
+++ b/en/short-user-manual_en_noimg.xhtml
@@ -22,12 +22,12 @@
     <p><strong>Note</strong>: The Tor Browser Bundles for Linux and Mac OS X are rather large, and you will not be able to receive any of these bundles with a Gmail, Hotmail or Yahoo account. If you cannot receive the bundle you want, send an email to help at rt.torproject.org and we will give you a list of website mirrors to use.</p>
     <h3 id="tor-for-smartphones">Tor for smartphones</h3>
     <p>You can get Tor on your Android device by installing the package named <em>Orbot</em>. For information about how to download and install Orbot, please see the <a href="https://www.torproject.org/docs/android.html.en">Tor Project website</a>.</p>
-    <p>We also have experimental packages for <a href="https://www.torproject.org/docs/N900.html.en">Nokia Maemo/N900</a> and <a href="http://sid77.slackware.it/ios/">Apple iOS</a>.</p>
+    <p>We also have experimental packages for <a href="https://www.torproject.org/docs/N900.html.en">Nokia Maemo/N900</a> and <a href="http://sid77.slackware.it/iphone/">Apple iOS</a>.</p>
     <h3 id="how-to-verify-that-you-have-the-right-version">How to verify that you have the right version</h3>
     <p>Before running the Tor Browser Bundle, you should make sure that you have the right version.</p>
     <p>The software you receive is accompanied by a file with the same name as the bundle and the extension <strong>.asc</strong>. This .asc file is a GPG signature, and will allow you to verify the file you've downloaded is exactly the one that we intended you to get.</p>
     <p>Before you can verify the signature, you will have to download and install GnuPG:</p>
-    <p><strong>Windows</strong>: <a href="http://gpg4win.org/download.html">http://gpg4win.org/download.html</a><br/><strong>Mac OS X</strong>: <a href="http://www.gpgtools.org/">http://www.gpgtools.org/</a><br/><strong>Linux</strong>: Most Linux distributions come with GnuPG preinstalled.</p>
+    <p><strong>Windows</strong>: <a href="http://gpg4win.org/download.html">http://gpg4win.org/download.html</a><br/><strong>Mac OS X</strong>: <a href="http://macgpg.sourceforge.net/">http://macgpg.sourceforge.net/</a><br/><strong>Linux</strong>: Most Linux distributions come with GnuPG preinstalled.</p>
     <p>Please note that you may need to edit the paths and the commands used below to get it to work on your system.</p>
     <p>Erinn Clark signs the Tor Browser Bundles with key 0x63FEE659. To import Erinn's key, run:</p>
     <pre>
@@ -45,6 +45,7 @@
       Key fingerprint = 8738 A680 B84B 3031 A630  F2DB 416F 0610 63FE E659
 uid                  Erinn Clark <erinn at torproject.org>
 uid                  Erinn Clark <erinn at debian.org>
+
 uid                  Erinn Clark <erinn at double-helix.org>
 sub   2048R/EB399FD7 2003-10-16
 </code>
@@ -57,7 +58,7 @@ sub   2048R/EB399FD7 2003-10-16
     <p>The output should say <em>"Good signature"</em>. A bad signature means that the file may have been tampered with. If you see a bad signature, send details about where you downloaded the package from, how you verified the signature, and the output from GnuPG in an email to help at rt.torproject.org.</p>
     <p>Once you have verified the signature and seen the <em>"Good signature"</em> output, go ahead and extract the package archive. You should then see a directory similar to <strong>tor-browser_en-US</strong>. Inside that directory is another directory called <strong>Docs</strong>, which contains a file called <strong>changelog</strong>. You want to make sure that the version number on the top line of the changelog file matches the version number in the filename.</p>
     <h3 id="how-to-use-the-tor-browser-bundle">How to use the Tor Browser Bundle</h3>
-    <p>After downloading the Tor Browser Bundle, extract the package onto your desktop or a USB stick. You should have a directory containing a few files. One of the files is an executable called "Start Tor Browser" (or "start-tor-browser", depending on your operating system).</p>
+    <p>After downloading the Tor Browser Bundle and extracting the package, you should have a directory with a few files in it. One of the files is an executable called "Start Tor Browser" (or "start-tor-browser", depending on your operating system).</p>
     <p>When you start the Tor Browser Bundle, you will first see Vidalia start up and connect you to the Tor network. After that, you will see a browser confirming that you are now using Tor. This is done by displaying <a href="https://check.torproject.org/">https://check.torproject.org/</a>. You can now browse the Internet through Tor.</p>
     <p>
       <em>Please note that it is important that you use the browser that comes with the bundle, and not your own browser.</em>

