[tor-commits] [tor/release-0.2.4] minor clarity fixes

[arma at torproject.org]

commit e719d05fd296a9dd59af9becb21ef3ff1c426b3c
Author: Roger Dingledine <arma at torproject.org>
Date:   Tue Dec 10 15:57:31 2013 -0500

    minor clarity fixes
---
 ChangeLog    |    8 ++++----
 ReleaseNotes |    8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/ChangeLog b/ChangeLog
index 4b19463..c401a65 100644
--- a/ChangeLog
+++ b/ChangeLog
@@ -13,16 +13,16 @@ Changes in version 0.2.4.19 - 2013-12-11
   creation requests; uses "directory guards" to reduce client enumeration
   risks; makes bridges collect and report statistics about the pluggable
   transports they support; cleans up and improves our geoip database;
-  gets much closer to ipv6 support for clients, bridges, and relays; makes
+  gets much closer to IPv6 support for clients, bridges, and relays; makes
   directory authorities use measured bandwidths rather than advertised
   ones when computing flags and thresholds; disables client-side DNS
   caching to reduce tracking risks; and fixes a big bug in bridge
-  reachability testing. This new release introduces two new design
+  reachability testing. This release introduces two new design
   abstractions in the code: a new "channel" abstraction between circuits
   and or_connections to allow for implementing alternate relay-to-relay
   transports, and a new "circuitmux" abstraction storing the queue of
-  circuits for a channel. It also includes many stability, security,
-  and privacy fixes.
+  circuits for a channel. The release also includes many stability,
+  security, and privacy fixes.
 
 
 Changes in version 0.2.4.18-rc - 2013-11-16
diff --git a/ReleaseNotes b/ReleaseNotes
index 485d275..c23a7de 100644
--- a/ReleaseNotes
+++ b/ReleaseNotes
@@ -18,16 +18,16 @@ Changes in version 0.2.4.19 - 2013-12-11
   creation requests; uses "directory guards" to reduce client enumeration
   risks; makes bridges collect and report statistics about the pluggable
   transports they support; cleans up and improves our geoip database;
-  gets much closer to ipv6 support for clients, bridges, and relays; makes
+  gets much closer to IPv6 support for clients, bridges, and relays; makes
   directory authorities use measured bandwidths rather than advertised
   ones when computing flags and thresholds; disables client-side DNS
   caching to reduce tracking risks; and fixes a big bug in bridge
-  reachability testing. This new release introduces two new design
+  reachability testing. This release introduces two new design
   abstractions in the code: a new "channel" abstraction between circuits
   and or_connections to allow for implementing alternate relay-to-relay
   transports, and a new "circuitmux" abstraction storing the queue of
-  circuits for a channel. It also includes many stability, security,
-  and privacy fixes.
+  circuits for a channel. The release also includes many stability,
+  security, and privacy fixes.
 
   o Major features (new circuit handshake):
     - Tor now supports a new circuit extension handshake designed by Ian