[tor-commits] r25654: {website} address ticket 5706 by making the suggestion to use TBB far (website/trunk/docs/en)

[Andrew Lewman]

Author: phobos
Date: 2012-05-23 00:44:48 +0000 (Wed, 23 May 2012)
New Revision: 25654

Modified:
   website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-osx.wml
   website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-unix.wml
   website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-web.wml
   website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-windows.wml
Log:
address ticket 5706 by making the suggestion to use TBB far stronger.


Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-osx.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-osx.wml	2012-05-22 16:37:49 UTC (rev 25653)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-osx.wml	2012-05-23 00:44:48 UTC (rev 25654)
@@ -10,15 +10,14 @@
     <a href="<page docs/tor-doc-osx>">Mac OS X Client</a>
   </div> 
   <div id="maincol">
-    <h1>Running the <a href="<page index>">Tor</a> client on Mac OS X</h1>
+    <h1>Running the Tor client on Mac OS X</h1>
     <br>
     
-    <p>
-    <b>Note that these are the installation instructions for running a Tor client on
-      Mac OS X. If you want to relay traffic for others to help the network
-      grow (please do), read the <a
-      href="<page docs/tor-doc-relay>">Configuring a relay</a> guide.</b>
-    </p>
+    <h2>Note that these are the installation instructions for running
+    a Tor client. The easiest way to do this is to simply download the
+    <a href="<page projects/torbrowser>">Tor Browser Bundle</a> and you
+    are done.
+    </h2>
     
     <hr>
     <a id="installing"></a>

Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-unix.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-unix.wml	2012-05-22 16:37:49 UTC (rev 25653)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-unix.wml	2012-05-23 00:44:48 UTC (rev 25654)
@@ -13,12 +13,11 @@
     <h1>Running the <a href="<page index>">Tor</a> client on Linux/BSD/Unix</h1>
     <br>
     
-    <p>
-    <b>Note that these are the installation instructions for running a
+    <h2>Note that these are the installation instructions for running a
     Tor client. The easiest way to do this is to simply download the <a
     href="<page projects/torbrowser>">Tor Browser Bundle</a> and you are
-    done. </b>
-    </p>
+    done.
+    </h2>
     
     <hr>
     <a id="installing"></a>

Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-web.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-web.wml	2012-05-22 16:37:49 UTC (rev 25653)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-web.wml	2012-05-23 00:44:48 UTC (rev 25654)
@@ -10,12 +10,12 @@
     <a href="<page docs/tor-doc-web>">Configure Your Browser</a>
   </div>
   <div id="maincol">
-    <h1>Configuring your browser to use <a href="<page index>">Tor</a></h1>
+    <h1>Configuring your browser to use Tor</h1>
     <br>
     
-    <p>We strongly encourage you to use the <a href="<page
+    <h2>We strongly encourage you to use the <a href="<page
     projects/torbrowser>">Tor Browser Bundle</a> instead of configuring
-    your own browser for usage with Tor.</p>
+    your own browser for usage with Tor.</h2>
 
     <br>
     

Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-windows.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-windows.wml	2012-05-22 16:37:49 UTC (rev 25653)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-windows.wml	2012-05-23 00:44:48 UTC (rev 25654)
@@ -13,9 +13,12 @@
     <h1>Running the <a href="<page index>">Tor</a> client on Microsoft Windows</h1>
     <br>
 
-    <p>We strongly encourage you to use the <a href="<page
-    projects/torbrowser>">Tor Browser Bundle</a> instead of configuring
-    your own browser for usage with Tor.</p>
+    <h2>
+    Note that these are the installation instructions for running a Tor
+    client. The easiest way to do this is to simply download the <a
+    href="<page projects/torbrowser>">Tor Browser Bundle</a> and you
+    are done.
+    </h2>
     
     <p>
     <b>Note that these are the installation instructions for running a Tor