[tor-commits] r25119: {website} get rid of the "unnecessary software jargon" (website/trunk/docs/en)

[Roger Dingledine]

Author: arma
Date: 2011-09-27 04:54:21 +0000 (Tue, 27 Sep 2011)
New Revision: 25119

Modified:
   website/trunk/docs/en/faq.wml
Log:
get rid of the "unnecessary software jargon"


Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/faq.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/faq.wml	2011-09-27 02:10:04 UTC (rev 25118)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/faq.wml	2011-09-27 04:54:21 UTC (rev 25119)
@@ -1399,7 +1399,8 @@
     <p>
     These organizations are not the same as <a href="<page
     donate/donate>">The Tor Project, Inc</a>, but we consider that a
-    feature. They're both run by nice people.
+    good thing. They're both run by nice people who are part of the
+    Tor community.
     </p>
 
     <p>
@@ -1409,7 +1410,7 @@
     improving Tor's anonymity more than by donating. At the same time
     though, economies
     of scale for bandwidth mean that combining many small donations into
-    several larger relays is much more efficient at improving network
+    several larger relays is more efficient at improving network
     performance. Improving anonymity and improving performance are both
     worthwhile goals, so however you can help is great!
     </p>