[tor-commits] r24687: {projects} Clarify a paragraph. (projects/articles/browser-privacy)

[Mike Perry]

Author: mikeperry
Date: 2011-04-27 22:12:07 +0000 (Wed, 27 Apr 2011)
New Revision: 24687

Modified:
   projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex
Log:
Clarify a paragraph.



Modified: projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex
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--- projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex	2011-04-27 21:33:27 UTC (rev 24686)
+++ projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex	2011-04-27 22:12:07 UTC (rev 24687)
@@ -131,11 +131,11 @@
 utilize everything they can to build complete portraits of users'
 identities~\cite{tracking-identity}.
 
-Despite what the user may believe, her actual web identity then is a
-superset of all the stored identifiers and authentication tokens used by the
-browser. This identity can link a user's activity in one instance to her
-activity in another instance, be it across time, or even on the very same page
-due to multiple content origins.
+Despite what the user may believe, her actual web identity then is a superset
+of all stored identifiers and authentication tokens used by the browser. This
+identity can link a user's activity in one instance to her activity in another
+instance, be it across time, or even on a single page due to common prevalent
+third-party content origins.
 
 Therefore, instead of viewing the user's identity as the sum of her
 identifiers, or as her relationship to individual websites, it is best to