[or-cvs] r23247: {projects} clean up some clunky wording (projects/articles)

[Roger Dingledine]

Author: arma
Date: 2010-09-19 07:02:01 +0000 (Sun, 19 Sep 2010)
New Revision: 23247

Modified:
   projects/articles/circumvention-features.html
   projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex
Log:
clean up some clunky wording


Modified: projects/articles/circumvention-features.html
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--- projects/articles/circumvention-features.html	2010-09-19 06:54:18 UTC (rev 23246)
+++ projects/articles/circumvention-features.html	2010-09-19 07:02:01 UTC (rev 23247)
@@ -153,8 +153,8 @@
 source licenses mean that you can examine the software to see how it
 really operates, and you have the right to modify the program. Even if
 not every user takes advantage of this opportunity (many people just want
-to use the tool as-is), the fact that some users can makes it much more
-likely that the tool will remain safe and useful. Without this option,
+to use the tool as-is), providing the option makes it much more
+likely that the tool will remain safe and useful. Otherwise,
 you are forced to trust that a small number of developers have thought
 of and addressed every possible problem.
 </p>

Modified: projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex
===================================================================
--- projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex	2010-09-19 06:54:18 UTC (rev 23246)
+++ projects/articles/circumvention-features.tex	2010-09-19 07:02:01 UTC (rev 23247)
@@ -146,8 +146,8 @@
 source licenses mean that you can examine the software to see how it
 really operates, and you have the right to modify the program. Even if
 not every user takes advantage of this opportunity (many people just want
-to use the tool as-is), the fact that some users can makes it much more
-likely that the tool will remain safe and useful. Without this option,
+to use the tool as-is), providing the option makes it much more
+likely that the tool will remain safe and useful. Otherwise,
 you are forced to trust that a small number of developers have thought
 of and addressed every possible problem.