[or-cvs] r20909: {website} fix the grammar in the first part, and add 'karmic' to the d (website/trunk/docs/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2009-11-04 10:23:58 -0500 (Wed, 04 Nov 2009)
New Revision: 20909

Modified:
   website/trunk/docs/en/debian.wml
Log:
fix the grammar in the first part, and add 'karmic' to the dev section


Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/debian.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/debian.wml	2009-11-04 07:44:27 UTC (rev 20908)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/debian.wml	2009-11-04 15:23:58 UTC (rev 20909)
@@ -48,9 +48,9 @@
 <p>
 You'll need to set up our package repository before you can fetch
 Tor. First, you need to figure out the name of your distribution. If
-you're using Ubuntu 9.10, it's  "karmic", for 9.04, use "jaunty". Ubuntu
-8.10 is "intrepid", and Ubuntu 8.04 is "hardy". If you're using Debian
-Etch, it's "etch", Debian Lenny is "lenny". Then add this line to your
+you're using Ubuntu 9.10, it's  "karmic". while 9.04 is "jaunty",
+8.10 is "intrepid", and 8.04 is "hardy". If you're using Debian
+Etch, it's "etch", and Debian Lenny is "lenny". Then add this line to your
 <tt>/etc/apt/sources.list</tt>
 file:<br />
 <pre>
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 deb     http://deb.torproject.org/torproject.org &lt;DISTRIBUTION&gt; main
 deb     http://deb.torproject.org/torproject.org experimental-&lt;DISTRIBUTION&gt; main
 </pre>
-where you substitute the name of your distro (etch, lenny, sid, jaunty,
+where you substitute the name of your distro (etch, lenny, sid, karmic, jaunty,
 intrepid, hardy) in place of &lt;DISTRIBUTION&gt;.
 </p>