[or-cvs] r20978: {website} Proofreading == good (website/trunk/torvm/en)

coderman at seul.org coderman at seul.org
Thu Nov 19 01:46:33 UTC 2009


Author: coderman
Date: 2009-11-18 20:46:33 -0500 (Wed, 18 Nov 2009)
New Revision: 20978

Modified:
   website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml
Log:
Proofreading == good

Modified: website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml	2009-11-19 01:44:29 UTC (rev 20977)
+++ website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml	2009-11-19 01:46:33 UTC (rev 20978)
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
 <a href="http://www.qemu.org/">Qemu</a> virtualization technology for more
 resilient clients and relays.
 </p>
-<p>You can think of Tor VM like a Tor virtual network card that routes all of traffic
- from your machine transparently over the Tor network without cumbersome application proxy settings or other configuration.
+<p>You can think of Tor VM like a Tor virtual network card that routes all of the traffic
+ from your machine transparently over the Tor network without application proxy settings or other configuration.
 </p>
 <p>The <a href="https://svn.torproject.org/svn/torvm/trunk/doc/design.html">Tor
 VM design document</a> contains additional detail about this work in progress.</p>



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