[or-cvs] r19134: {website} Edit for grammar / brevity. (website/trunk/torvm/en)

[coderman at seul.org]

Author: coderman
Date: 2009-03-26 00:18:07 -0400 (Thu, 26 Mar 2009)
New Revision: 19134

Modified:
   website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml
Log:
Edit for grammar / brevity.

Modified: website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml
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--- website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml	2009-03-26 04:02:09 UTC (rev 19133)
+++ website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml	2009-03-26 04:18:07 UTC (rev 19134)
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 
 <h2>What Is It?</h2>
 <p>Tor VM is an experimental transparent Tor proxy for Windows that uses Qemu
-virtualization technology for more resilient Tor clients and relays.
+virtualization technology for more resilient clients and relays.
 </p>
 <p><strong>This initial 0.0.1 release is a work in progress!</strong>
 See the
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 
 <p>The bundle packages are preferred since they include Vidalia and other Tor
 software that improves the user experience. If a portable Tor VM instance is
-required then the self extracting archive can be used to install Tor VM alone
+required the self extracting archive can be used to install Tor VM alone
 onto a portable storage device.</p>
 
 <ul>