[or-cvs] r19124: {website} Edit for grammar / brevity. (website/trunk/torvm/en)

[coderman at seul.org]

Author: coderman
Date: 2009-03-25 08:39:00 -0400 (Wed, 25 Mar 2009)
New Revision: 19124

Modified:
   website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml
Log:
Edit for grammar / brevity.

Modified: website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml
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--- website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml	2009-03-25 09:15:23 UTC (rev 19123)
+++ website/trunk/torvm/en/index.wml	2009-03-25 12:39:00 UTC (rev 19124)
@@ -27,8 +27,7 @@
 <p>The bundle packages are preferred since they include Vidalia and other Tor
 software that improves the user experience. If a portable Tor VM instance is
 required then the self extracting archive can be used to install Tor VM alone
-onto a portable storage device and run wheverever administrator rights are
-available to you.</p>
+onto a portable storage device.</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li><a href="dist/TorVM-0.0.1-NetInstaller.exe">Tor VM Network Installer</a>
@@ -226,8 +225,8 @@
 <p><img src="img/switch-user.png" alt="Switch to restricted user to play Flash content" /></p>
 
 <p>First be sure that transparent proxy of Internet traffic through Tor is
-working correctly. Tor VM ensures that all your traffic is anonymized
-regardless of whether TorButton and Firefox are used or not.</p>
+working correctly. Tor VM ensures that all your traffic is relayed
+by default without any application configuration.</p>
 
 <p><img src="img/flash01.png" alt="Verify Tor usage at check.torproject.org" /></p>