[or-cvs] r21092: {website} text fixes (website/trunk/en)

[phobos at seul.org]

Author: phobos
Date: 2009-12-02 22:48:08 -0500 (Wed, 02 Dec 2009)
New Revision: 21092

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/donate.wml
Log:
text fixes


Modified: website/trunk/en/donate.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/donate.wml	2009-12-03 03:41:16 UTC (rev 21091)
+++ website/trunk/en/donate.wml	2009-12-03 03:48:08 UTC (rev 21092)
@@ -23,7 +23,11 @@
 
 <div class="underline"></div>
 
-<h3>We offer a few ways to support online privacy and anonymity through donations.  You can donate <a href="#money">money</a>, <a href="#services">services</a>, <a href="#hardware">hardware</a>, and <a href="#time">time</a>.  Your tax-deductible donation helps ensure online anonymity and privacy continue to exist in the world.</h3>
+<h3>We offer a few ways to support online privacy and anonymity
+through donations.  You can donate <a href="#money">money</a>, <a
+href="#services">services</a>, <a href="#hardware">hardware</a>, and
+<a href="#time">time</a>.  Your tax-deductible donation helps ensure
+online anonymity and privacy continue to exist in the world.</h3>
 
 <br />
 
@@ -39,12 +43,11 @@
 <a id-"relay"></a>
 <h3><a class="anchor" href="#relay">Run a relay</a></h3>
 <p>The easiest, most effective way to support online privacy and
-anonymity around the world is to run a relay.  You'll join only 2,000
-other people in the world running a relay.  The easiest way to speed up
+anonymity around the world is to run a relay.  You join a set of
+committed people in the world already running a relay.  The easiest way to speed up
 Tor is to add more relays to the network.  Running a relay is as easy as
-<a href="<page docs/tor-doc-relay>">clicking a button in the
-software</a>.  Join the network.  Support your
-online anonymity and privacy!</p>
+<a href="<page docs/tor-doc-relay>">clicking a button</a>.  Join the
+network.  Support your online anonymity and privacy!</p>
 
 <div class="underline"></div>
 <a id="money"></a>