[or-cvs] r20367: {website} Better wording, remove "." to not confuse people (website/trunk/docs/en)

[sebastian at seul.org]

Author: sebastian
Date: 2009-08-24 21:55:57 -0400 (Mon, 24 Aug 2009)
New Revision: 20367

Modified:
   website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-unix.wml
Log:
Better wording, remove "." to not confuse people

Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-unix.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-unix.wml	2009-08-25 01:49:16 UTC (rev 20366)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-unix.wml	2009-08-25 01:55:57 UTC (rev 20367)
@@ -79,12 +79,11 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-On some distributions, localhost is mapped to an IPv6 address, and Torbutton
-(see next step) might not be able to connect to Privoxy. If this is the case,
-change "localhost" to "127.0.0.1" in the line <br />
+On some distributions, localhost is mapped to an IPv6 address, and some
+programs might not be able to connect to Privoxy. If so, change the line
 <tt>listen-address localhost:8118</tt><br />
-so that it now reads<br />
-<tt>listen-address 127.0.0.1:8118</tt>.
+so that it reads<br />
+<tt>listen-address 127.0.0.1:8118</tt>
 </p>
 
 <p>Privoxy keeps a log file of everything passed through it.  In