[or-cvs] r16891: {website} fix some grammar (website/trunk/en)

arma at seul.org arma at seul.org
Sat Sep 13 09:08:25 UTC 2008


Author: arma
Date: 2008-09-13 05:08:25 -0400 (Sat, 13 Sep 2008)
New Revision: 16891

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/documentation.wml
Log:
fix some grammar


Modified: website/trunk/en/documentation.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/documentation.wml	2008-09-13 07:23:38 UTC (rev 16890)
+++ website/trunk/en/documentation.wml	2008-09-13 09:08:25 UTC (rev 16891)
@@ -158,8 +158,8 @@
 See Mike's "Securing the Tor network" talk from Defcon in July 2007
 (<a href="http://freehaven.net/~arma/Defcon15-Mike_Perry-Securing_the_Tor_Network.mp4">video</a>,
  <a href="http://freehaven.net/~arma/SecuringTheTorNetwork.pdf">slides</a>).
-It describes common ways to attack networks like Tor, how we try
-to defend against them and introduces the <a
+It describes common ways to attack networks like Tor and how we try
+to defend against them, and it introduces the <a
 href="https://svn.torproject.org/svn/torflow/trunk/README">Torflow</a>
 script collection.
 </li>



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