[or-cvs] r17374: {website} clarify what sort of encryption. maybe. more words at least. (website/trunk/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2008-11-23 02:38:45 -0500 (Sun, 23 Nov 2008)
New Revision: 17374

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/faq.wml
Log:
clarify what sort of encryption. maybe. more words at least.


Modified: website/trunk/en/faq.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/faq.wml	2008-11-23 07:25:36 UTC (rev 17373)
+++ website/trunk/en/faq.wml	2008-11-23 07:38:45 UTC (rev 17374)
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 
 <p>Anonymity and Security:</p>
 <ul>
-<li><a href="#KeyManagement">What are all these keys used for?</a></li>
+<li><a href="#KeyManagement">Tell me about all the keys Tor uses.</a></li>
 </ul>
 
 <hr />
@@ -452,14 +452,15 @@
 <hr />
 
 <a id="KeyManagement"></a>
-<h3><a class="anchor" href="#KeyManagement">What are all these keys
-used for?</a></h3>
+<h3><a class="anchor" href="#KeyManagement">Tell me about all the keys
+Tor uses.</a></h3>
 
 <p>
 Tor uses a variety of different keys, with three goals in mind: 1)
-encryption (inside the Tor network), 2) authentication so you know you're
-talking to the relays you meant to talk to, and 3) signatures to make
-sure all users know the same set of relays.
+encryption to ensure privacy of data within the Tor network, 2)
+authentication so clients know they're
+talking to the relays they meant to talk to, and 3) signatures to make
+sure all clients know the same set of relays.
 </p>
 
 <p>