[or-cvs] r17280: {tor} Hrmm, still not sure I like the flow of this paragraph, but (tor/trunk/contrib)

[mikeperry at seul.org]

Author: mikeperry
Date: 2008-11-16 02:27:46 -0500 (Sun, 16 Nov 2008)
New Revision: 17280

Modified:
   tor/trunk/contrib/tor-exit-notice.html
Log:

Hrmm, still not sure I like the flow of this paragraph, but
this is slightly better.



Modified: tor/trunk/contrib/tor-exit-notice.html
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--- tor/trunk/contrib/tor-exit-notice.html	2008-11-16 07:26:46 UTC (rev 17279)
+++ tor/trunk/contrib/tor-exit-notice.html	2008-11-16 07:27:46 UTC (rev 17280)
@@ -57,9 +57,9 @@
 href="http://voices.washingtonpost.com/securityfix/2008/08/web_fraud_20_distributing_your.html">more
 powerful networks</a> than Tor on a daily basis. Thus, in the mind of this
 operator, the social need for easily accessible censorship-resistant private,
-anonymous communication trumps the risk of bad actors, who are almost always
-more easily uncovered by traditional police work than by extensive monitoring
-and surveillance.
+anonymous communication trumps the risk of unskilled bad actors, who are
+almost always more easily uncovered by traditional police work than by
+extensive monitoring and surveillance anyway.
 
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