[or-cvs] r13152: Wording changes; note Firefox 3 compatibility issue with old (in torbrowser/trunk: . www)

[sjm217 at seul.org]

Author: sjm217
Date: 2008-01-16 15:03:14 -0500 (Wed, 16 Jan 2008)
New Revision: 13152

Modified:
   torbrowser/trunk/TODO
   torbrowser/trunk/www/index.html
Log:
Wording changes; note Firefox 3 compatibility issue with older Windows

Modified: torbrowser/trunk/TODO
===================================================================
--- torbrowser/trunk/TODO	2008-01-16 19:30:57 UTC (rev 13151)
+++ torbrowser/trunk/TODO	2008-01-16 20:03:14 UTC (rev 13152)
@@ -93,6 +93,12 @@
 
 - Make a web page for bundle
 
+Questions
+=========
+
+- Firefox 3 will not support Windows prior to XP. Is this a problem for
+our target audience?
+
 Done
 ====
 

Modified: torbrowser/trunk/www/index.html
===================================================================
--- torbrowser/trunk/www/index.html	2008-01-16 19:30:57 UTC (rev 13151)
+++ torbrowser/trunk/www/index.html	2008-01-16 20:03:14 UTC (rev 13152)
@@ -27,20 +27,20 @@
 <p style="font-size: 120%; margin: 5mm"><a href="">Tor Browser Bundle for Windows</a> (version 0.0.7, English,
 12 MB)</p>
 
-<h3>Installation</h3>
+<h3>Extraction</h3>
 
 <p>Double click on the file downloaded above. Click <strong>...</strong> and
-select where you want to install the bundle (either the hard disk or a USB pen
+select where you want to extract the bundle (either the hard disk or a USB pen
 drive), then click <strong>OK</strong>.</p>
 
-<p>Click <strong>Extract</strong> to begin installation. Installation may take a
-few minutes.</p>
+<p>Click <strong>Extract</strong> to begin Extraction. This may take a
+few minutes to complete.</p>
 
-<p><img src="screenshot1.png" alt="Screenshot of installation process"></p>
+<p><img src="screenshot1.png" alt="Screenshot of extraction process"></p>
 
 <h3>Usage</h3>
 
-<p>Once installation is complete, open the folder <strong>Tor Browser</strong> from the location you installed the bundle.</p>
+<p>Once extraction is complete, open the folder <strong>Tor Browser</strong> from the location you extracted the bundle.</p>
 
 <p>Double click on the <strong>Tor Browser</strong> application (it may be called
 <strong>Tor Browser.bat</strong> on some systems.)</p>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 <p><img src="screenshot3.png" alt="Screenshot of Firefox"></p>
 
 <p>Once you are finished, close any open Firefox windows. Vidalia and
-Tor will automatically close.<p>
+Tor will automatically close. For privacy reasons, the list of webpages you visited and any cookies will be deleted.<p>
 
 <h3>Comments and suggestions</h3>