[or-cvs] r13769: touchups (website/trunk/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2008-02-27 21:04:32 -0500 (Wed, 27 Feb 2008)
New Revision: 13769

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/donate.wml
Log:
touchups


Modified: website/trunk/en/donate.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/donate.wml	2008-02-28 01:43:11 UTC (rev 13768)
+++ website/trunk/en/donate.wml	2008-02-28 02:04:32 UTC (rev 13769)
@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@
 
 <div class="main-column">
 
-<h2>Donate to the Tor Project!</h2>
+<h2>Donate to The Tor Project!</h2>
 <hr />
 
 <p>
-If you use Tor and would like to help support the Tor Project, please
+If you use Tor and would like to help support The Tor Project, please
 consider making a donation to help us to continue our work.  We offer a
 few ways to make a donation:</p>
 <ul>
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 </ul>
 
 <p>As of December 2006, Tor is a US 501[c][3] research/educational
-nonprofit.  Donations to the Tor Project may be tax deductible to persons
+nonprofit.  Donations to The Tor Project may be tax deductible to persons
 who are in the US or who pay taxes in countries with reciprocity with
 the US on charitable donations.  If you have any questions, please
 <a href="mailto:donations at torproject.org">contact us</a> directly.  We're happy to discuss major gifts, planned
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 </blockquote>
 
 <p>
-Attention US citizens, if you would like an acknowledgement letter
+Attention US citizens: if you would like an acknowledgement letter,
 please tell us along with your donation.  A canceled check, money/postal order receipt, or appraisal
  of donated property are valid records according to the IRS.  
 </p>
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
 <a id="wire"></a>
 <h3><a class="anchor" href="#wire">Wire Transfers</a></h3>
 <p>We're happy to accept wire transfers over US$100.  If you are located
-in Europe, please see below.
+in Europe, <a href=="#eurobank">please see below</a>.
 
 <p>
 Organization Address:<br />
@@ -125,12 +125,12 @@
 <a id="eurobank"></a>
 <h3><a class="anchor" href="#eurobank">European Bank Transfers</a></h3>
 <p>In Europe, we have a funding arrangement with the <a
-href="http://www.ccc.de">Chaos Computing Club</a>.  Your donations are
-to the CCC.  The CCC controls the funds to do beneficial activities for
+href="http://www.ccc.de/">Chaos Computer Club</a>.  Your donations are
+to the CCC, and they use the funds to do beneficial activities for
 Tor in Europe.  Residents from any of the <a
 href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single_Euro_Payments_Area">31 SEPA
 member states</a> can wire up to 50.000
-Euro at the cost of a domestic transaction (ie, usually free if
+Euro at the cost of a domestic transaction (i.e., usually free if
 submitted electronically).</p>
 
 <p>