[or-cvs] r16688: {tor} we bad grammar (tor/trunk/doc/design-paper)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2008-08-30 01:43:58 -0400 (Sat, 30 Aug 2008)
New Revision: 16688

Modified:
   tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/blocking.html
   tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex
Log:
we bad grammar


Modified: tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/blocking.html
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--- tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/blocking.html	2008-08-29 17:02:26 UTC (rev 16687)
+++ tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/blocking.html	2008-08-30 05:43:58 UTC (rev 16688)
@@ -1393,7 +1393,7 @@
 <div class="p"><!----></div>
 Many people speculate that installing and using a Tor client in areas with
 particularly extreme firewalls is a high risk &mdash; and the risk increases
-as the firewall gets more restrictive. This notion certain has merit, but
+as the firewall gets more restrictive. This notion certainly has merit, but
 there's
 a counter pressure as well: as the firewall gets more restrictive, more
 ordinary people behind it end up using Tor for more mainstream activities,

Modified: tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex
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--- tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex	2008-08-29 17:02:26 UTC (rev 16687)
+++ tor/trunk/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex	2008-08-30 05:43:58 UTC (rev 16688)
@@ -1318,7 +1318,7 @@
 
 Many people speculate that installing and using a Tor client in areas with
 particularly extreme firewalls is a high risk---and the risk increases
-as the firewall gets more restrictive. This notion certain has merit, but
+as the firewall gets more restrictive. This notion certainly has merit, but
 there's
 a counter pressure as well: as the firewall gets more restrictive, more
 ordinary people behind it end up using Tor for more mainstream activities,