[or-cvs] r11485: two dir-spec cleanups from steve (tor/trunk/doc/spec)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2007-09-18 12:05:39 -0400 (Tue, 18 Sep 2007)
New Revision: 11485

Modified:
   tor/trunk/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt
Log:
two dir-spec cleanups from steve


Modified: tor/trunk/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt
===================================================================
--- tor/trunk/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt	2007-09-18 16:05:34 UTC (rev 11484)
+++ tor/trunk/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt	2007-09-18 16:05:39 UTC (rev 11485)
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
         downloads consisted mainly of router descriptors that clients
         already had.
 
-      * Every directory authorities was a trust bottleneck: if a single
+      * Every directory authority was a trust bottleneck: if a single
         directory authority lied, it could make clients believe for a time
         an arbitrarily distorted view of the Tor network.  (Clients
         trusted the most recent signed document they downloaded.) Thus,
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@
    Routers may act as directory caches to reduce load on the directory
    authorities.  They announce this in their descriptors.
 
-   Periodically, each directory authority periodically generates a view of
+   Periodically, each directory authority generates a view of
    the current descriptors and status for known routers.  They send a
    signed summary of this view (a "status vote") to the other
    authorities.  The authorities compute the result of this vote, and sign