[or-cvs] r12092: a bit more polish (website/trunk/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2007-10-22 03:30:35 -0400 (Mon, 22 Oct 2007)
New Revision: 12092

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/download.wml
Log:
a bit more polish


Modified: website/trunk/en/download.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/download.wml	2007-10-22 07:11:02 UTC (rev 12091)
+++ website/trunk/en/download.wml	2007-10-22 07:30:35 UTC (rev 12092)
@@ -7,6 +7,8 @@
 
 <h2>Download current Tor version</h2>
 
+<hr />
+
 <p>
 Tor is distributed as <a href="http://www.fsf.org/">Free Software</a>
 under the <a href="<svnsandbox>LICENSE">3-clause BSD license</a>.
@@ -141,9 +143,9 @@
 <p>
 To keep informed of security advisories and new stable releases, subscribe
 to the <a href="http://archives.seul.org/or/announce/">or-announce
-mailing list</a> (you will need to confirm via email). You can also
+mailing list</a> (you will be asked to confirm via email). You can also
 <a href="http://rss.gmane.org/gmane.network.onion-routing.announce">watch
-the RSS feed</a>.
+the list's RSS feed</a>.
 </p>
 
 <form action="http://freehaven.net/cgi-bin/majordomo.cgi">
@@ -151,14 +153,16 @@
 <input type="hidden" name="subscribe" value="1">
 <input type="hidden" name="host" value="freehaven.net">
 <input name="email" size="15">
-<input type="submit" value="subscribe">
+<input type="submit" value="subscribe to or-announce">
 </form>
 
+<hr />
+
 <h2>Development releases and source code</h2>
 
 <p>
 These development snapshots are released so you can help us test new
-features and bugfixes. Even though these have a higher version number
+features and bugfixes. Even though they have a higher version number
 than the stable versions listed above, there is a much higher chance
 of serious reliability and security bugs in these downloads. Please be
 prepared to report bugs.