[or-cvs] r12078: streamline a bit more (website/trunk/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2007-10-21 05:37:50 -0400 (Sun, 21 Oct 2007)
New Revision: 12078

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/index.wml
Log:
streamline a bit more


Modified: website/trunk/en/index.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/index.wml	2007-10-21 09:13:47 UTC (rev 12077)
+++ website/trunk/en/index.wml	2007-10-21 09:37:50 UTC (rev 12078)
@@ -43,21 +43,16 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Hundreds of thousands of people around the world use Tor &mdash; <a
-href="<page whousestor>">journalists and bloggers, human rights workers,
+Hundreds of thousands of people around the world use Tor for a <a
+href="<page whousestor>">wide variety of reasons</a>: journalists and
+bloggers, human rights workers,
 law enforcement officers, soldiers, corporations, citizens of repressive
-regimes, and just ordinary citizens</a>. We have a full page devoted
+regimes, and just ordinary citizens. We have a full page devoted
 to explaining exactly <a href="<page overview>">what Tor does, why this
 diversity of users is important, and how Tor works</a>.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-To quickly start using Tor, we recommend the
-<a href="<page download>">Vidalia bundle</a>
-as the easiest to install and get working.
-</p>
-
-<p>
 There are three pieces of fine print you need to know about.
 First, Tor does not protect you if you do not use it correctly.
 Read <a href="<page download>#Warnings">our list of warnings</a> and
@@ -106,10 +101,6 @@
 past support, fiscal sponsorship, and help in hosting some of our web
 pages, and for their continued mentorship of and counsel to our
 fledgling nonprofit organization.</li>
-<li>Sep 2007: If you have received email claiming to be Tor, it wasn't
-from us. The <a href="<page download>">official Tor bundles</a> can be <a
-href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/VerifyingSignatures">verified
-as authentic</a>.</li>
 <li>Aug 2007: <strong>Please update your Tor software!</strong>  The
 latest versions (stable: 0.1.2.17; development: 0.2.0.6-alpha)
 patch a significant security vulnerability.  See the <a