[or-cvs] r12529: fix a bug on the frontpage, reported by robert hogan (website/trunk/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2007-11-17 07:30:16 -0500 (Sat, 17 Nov 2007)
New Revision: 12529

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/index.wml
Log:
fix a bug on the frontpage, reported by robert hogan


Modified: website/trunk/en/index.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/index.wml	2007-11-17 12:28:18 UTC (rev 12528)
+++ website/trunk/en/index.wml	2007-11-17 12:30:16 UTC (rev 12529)
@@ -28,10 +28,13 @@
 <p>Tor is a software project that helps you defend against <a
 href="<page overview>">traffic analysis</a>, a form of network
 surveillance that threatens personal freedom and privacy, confidential
-business activities and relationships, and state security.  Tor
-protects you by encrypting your communications and bouncing them
-around a distributed network of relays run by volunteers
-all around the world. Tor works with many of your
+business activities and relationships, and state security.
+Tor protects you by bouncing your communications around a distributed
+network of relays run by volunteers all around the world: it prevents
+somebody watching your Internet connection from learning what sites you
+visit, and it prevents the sites you visit from learning where you're
+coming from.
+Tor works with many of your
 existing applications, including web browsers, instant messaging
 clients, remote login, and other applications based on the Internet's
 TCP protocol.