[or-cvs] r12420: sometimes grammar can be clearer (website/trunk/en)

arma at seul.org arma at seul.org
Wed Nov 7 19:10:22 UTC 2007


Author: arma
Date: 2007-11-07 14:10:21 -0500 (Wed, 07 Nov 2007)
New Revision: 12420

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/download.wml
Log:
sometimes grammar can be clearer


Modified: website/trunk/en/download.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/download.wml	2007-11-07 18:29:10 UTC (rev 12419)
+++ website/trunk/en/download.wml	2007-11-07 19:10:21 UTC (rev 12420)
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@
 Tor is distributed as <a href="http://www.fsf.org/">Free Software</a>
 under the <a href="<svnsandbox>LICENSE">3-clause BSD license</a>. The
 bundles also include <a href="http://vidalia-project.net/">Vidalia</a>
-and <a href="http://www.privoxy.org/">Privoxy</a>, supporting applications
-distributed under the GNU GPL.
+and <a href="http://www.privoxy.org/">Privoxy</a>, which are supporting
+applications distributed under the GNU GPL.
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